The passage talks about the first people who migrated to the American continent entered the continent via a land bridge called Beringia which joined Eastern Asia with North America. The professor disagrees with this claim by providing various examples.
First of all, the professor says that ice sheets melted about 13000 years ago. But the passage claims that people who entered Nothern Amercia came through Beringia. Since Beringia was supposedly frozen and filled with ice people couldn't migrate which does not add up.
Secondly, the professor states that there are archaeological sites which suggest that there are remains that are much more older. To bolster this, the professor gives examples of remains found in the Eastern United states that are 19000 years old and in South America that are from pre Clovis time and are about 15000 years old. So such evidence does not tally with the claims of the passage that the first settlers came between 13000 and 11000 years ago.
Finally, the professor says that the old remains found do not resemble to the Native Americans. They resembled to the people from Northern Japan.In addition to this, DNA analysis shows that people from Siberia migrated to America 40000 years ago which is way before the Clovis people. This data furthur weakens the claims made by the passage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...sedly frozen and filled with ice people couldnt migrate which does not add up. Secon...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'older' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: older
...st that there are remains that are much more older. To bolster this, the professor gives e...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...mbled to the people from Northern Japan.In addition to this, DNA analysis shows th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, second, secondly, so, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 219.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08219178082 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13241520244 2.5805825403 83% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557077625571 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 419.366225166 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6177965204 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.181818182 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06452816374 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0657304071753 0.272083759551 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0186855754609 0.0996497079465 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436514075694 0.0662205650399 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0419566363979 0.162205337803 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500013415237 0.0443174109184 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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