nowadays students are more interested in politics?

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 30.3222958057 185% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 1373.03311258 151% => OK
No of words: 386.0 270.72406181 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37564766839 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90047676844 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 145.348785872 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60621761658 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 419.366225166 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 21.2450331126 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.666586498 49.2860985944 267% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.5 110.228320801 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.6 21.698381199 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06452816374 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.09492273731 195% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 60.0 4.19205298013 1431% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275014467272 0.272083759551 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108106910159 0.0996497079465 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082783664598 0.0662205650399 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119825687754 0.162205337803 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919594381803 0.0443174109184 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.3589403974 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 53.8541721854 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.0289183223 175% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.2367328918 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.42419426049 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 63.6247240618 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.498013245 164% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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