o You Agree Or Disagree With The Following Statement? Dancing Plays An Important Role In A Culture. Use Specific Reasons And Examples To Support Your Answer
it is an undeniable fact that dances play a significant role in every culture. Different parts of the world have different forms of dance, which reflects their cultural values and believes. my arguments for holding this position are that,not only can people express their emotions through dancing but also can present their traditions.
first of all, the main reason why I hold this idea about the vital role of dancing in a culture is that every country has its own unique form of dances for their various occasions such as wedding, religious and annual ceremonies. For instance, in my country, Iran, there is a specific type of dance which are used during wedding ceremonies that people perform particular movements with colorful scarves, the participants illustrate their happiness and gladness that has rooted in our culture.
secondly, dancing has been known as a pretty art throughout the world. These days, all countries make a lot of effort to attract more tourists, in the first step they try to show their traditional customs and arts and also they present dances as an important ones. For example,Turkey's governments every year held a glorious festival to display its dances that I have experienced to visit, it is really impressive and majestic which amuse all audiences.
In conclusion, some people at first glance find it a little hard to see obvious bond between dance and culture, but according to above-mentioned reasons, I strongly agree with the statement that dancing plays an important role in a culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 251.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10756972112 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75265073665 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9357532394 49.2860985944 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.444444444 110.228320801 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 21.698381199 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7777777778 7.06452816374 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238036424715 0.272083759551 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101028045331 0.0996497079465 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956079426723 0.0662205650399 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15480625049 0.162205337803 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814967874163 0.0443174109184 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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