Official 40 Task 1
Many scientists believe it would be possible to maintain a permanent human presence on Mars or the Moon. On the other hand, conditions on Venus are so extreme and inhospitable that maintaining a human presence there would be impossible.
The reading material points out that the human can not live in venus and supports this idea by 3 reasons. In the lecture professor explains solutions for every point that was made by article. He believes it is challanging but not impossible.
First, readind material claims that atmosphere pressure in venus is high enough that not any spacecraft can be close to it and would be crashed. The lecturer provides a solution for this issue by floating a station in 50 kilometer distance from the venus which in that area the pressure is equal to earth and the station would not be crushed as the pressure is higher in surface not in higher altitude from the venus surface.
Also, the author explaines the lack of oxygen as an issue for having the station in venus which cause a burden of importing water from earth. The professor points out that because the venus atmosphere has co2 and so2 they can use it in a reaction to produce o2 out of it. In this way the lack of o2 and water would not be an issue if they make it.
Lastly, the autor explains that little sunshine reaches to the venus because of thick cloud and they can not use sun power for their machines and their equipment. The professor illustrates that the cloud are not thick in 50 kilometer of venus surface and having a station at that altitude could benefit from the reflection of sun light from the venus surface and below and also uses the direct sun for their sun power design.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: kilometers
...ates that the cloud are not thick in 50 kilometer of venus surface and having a station a...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50570342205 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31187462312 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460076045627 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9441450015 49.2860985944 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 21.698381199 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06452816374 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119435505878 0.272083759551 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547562908683 0.0996497079465 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461731924953 0.0662205650399 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761604748821 0.162205337803 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424721182707 0.0443174109184 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.2367328918 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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