organic food
According to the text it is better to consume organic food due to the fact that it is healthier, it is free of pesticides and does not pollute surrounding ecosystems. On the other hand, the professor mentions that consuming non-organic food is not as harmful as popular belief tends to inform.
The text states that consuming organic food is healthier because it does not have all of the harmful chemicals that might risk the consumer’s life. Additionally, the text also mentions that the use of pesticides could end up in nearby water supplies, causing damage on the environment.
Meanwhile, the professor stipulates that non-organic food does not have as much chemicals as people tend to think, she explains that crops are washed once they are harvested, also when they are put up for sale and once more before consumption, eliminating all chemicals in the process. Furthermore, the professor also mention that the pesticides are not dangerous for humans and they only protect crops from plagues such as weeds and insects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...d is healthier because it does not have all of the harmful chemicals that might risk the c...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... that non-organic food does not have as much chemicals as people tend to think, she ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 1373.03311258 63% => OK
No of words: 170.0 270.72406181 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10588235294 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.04702891845 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86933434524 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 145.348785872 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547058823529 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 419.366225166 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.891923349 49.2860985944 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 110.228320801 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 21.698381199 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06452816374 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284461236524 0.272083759551 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159214400984 0.0996497079465 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119695220515 0.0662205650399 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21943089243 0.162205337803 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106322195532 0.0443174109184 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.3589403974 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.8541721854 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 63.6247240618 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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