The reading and lecturer are both about what are the advantages and disadvantages of physical punishment. The author believes that physical punishment can lead to two possibilities such as hating their parents or they don't love their children. The lecturer casts doubts on the claim made in the article. She thinks that it can be used to teach children about the discipline and self estimation.
First of all, the author point out that children may have fear of getting punish or parents make take away certain privileges from them if they are performing bad act. It is mentioned that this make the behavior of the children different form the usual one, but the lecturer challenges this point with self estimation which can be taught to children if they are capable to understand. For Instance,if you are try to punish a small two year old child they would not understand much of the different, so we should punish children but not to the cause of getting them away from there parents. Furthermore, she argues that we should punish children as per there way of understanding rather than increasing the relation difference between child and parent relationship.
Secondly, the passage assert that even though you punish your children don't do it often or in more aggression this will lead to more hater and discomfort between the behavior of an children. It is mentioned that try to discipline them properly to follow certain rules and regulation right from their childhood this would not lead to difficulties. The lecturer rebuts this by explaining you should not only scold your children but also appreciate and motivate them if they perform or do something good. She suggest this would nurture the relationship between you and your children. She also elaborates that it would be strengthening the small gaps between you and the child giving positive structure to the relation.
Finally, the author establishes that it is good to motivate you children for their good as well as punish and scold them if they are wrong, but it should not be creating consequence. Whatever, you do it should be in your limit in order to have properly because the eventually will affect the behavior of your child.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...es such as hating their parents or they dont love their children. The lecturer casts...
^^^^
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rents or they dont love their children. The lecturer casts doubts on the claim made...
^^^
Line 2, column 397, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
... are capable to understand. For Instance,if you are try to punish a small two year ...
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Line 2, column 444, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'child' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'children'.
Suggestion: children
... are try to punish a small two year old child they would not understand much of the d...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...at even though you punish your children dont do it often or in more aggression this ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... and discomfort between the behavior of an children. It is mentioned that try to d...
^^
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: an child; children
... and discomfort between the behavior of an children. It is mentioned that try to discipline...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ight from their childhood this would not lead to difficulties. The lecturer rebut...
^^
Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
... they perform or do something good. She suggest this would nurture the relationship bet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 7.30242825607 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 22.412803532 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1373.03311258 133% => OK
No of words: 370.0 270.72406181 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94054054054 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69928973695 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47027027027 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 419.366225166 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9491564622 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.866666667 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163621734413 0.272083759551 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591760978899 0.0996497079465 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729021076914 0.0662205650399 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108925737257 0.162205337803 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679667456649 0.0443174109184 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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