The reading and lecture about of the uses of the great houses foe the settlements of chaco canyon in New Mexico. The author believed that these houses used for this purpose. The lecturer casts duobts the argument which made in reading passage ,he said that big houses not used for livig ,
First of all, the author states that these houses have very beautiful exterior stone,also contain a lot of large room engouh to accupy many families, The lecturer rebute this argument. He claim that aithough they have anice architecture from out side but in side the building they are not,futhermore a lot of numer of families need a many fireplaces whicch are used for cooking ,the eividence showed only a few numers of fireplaces
Second . the author says that the big houes used as storage to keep grain and food. This point lis challenged by lecturer , he said if these houses used as aplace for keep grain and supply of maize ,why there are a lot of room with large empty containers?, these evidences aprove that these houses never be used as a storages.
Finaly, the author claim that houses used as ceremonial centers and the the archaelogist found enormous old material like a large of broken pieses of pots which may be used for intruduce food in the festivels. The lecturer, on the other hand states that,in adduition to the presence of pieces of broken pots there are material likr stones , cement and also tools used for constriction purposes .that is indication
of these placec may be uses as acarbige for a lot of stuffs.
The reading and lecture about of the uses of the great houses foe the settlements of chaco canyon in New Mexico. The author believed that these houses used for this purpose. The lecturer casts duobts the argument which made in reading passage ,he said that big houses not used for livig ,
First of all, the author states that these houses have very beautiful exterior stone,also contain a lot of large room engouh to accupy many families, The lecturer rebute this argument. He claim that aithough they have anice architecture from out side but in side the building they are not,futhermore a lot of numer of families need a many fireplaces whicch are used for cooking ,the eividence showed only a few numers of fireplaces
Second . the author says that the big houes used as storage to keep grain and food. This point lis challenged by lecturer , he said if these houses used as aplace for keep grain and supply of maize ,why there are a lot of room with large empty containers?, these evidences aprove that these houses never be used as a storages.
Finaly, the author claim that houses used as ceremonial centers and the the archaelogist found enormous old material like a large of broken pieses of pots which may be used for intruduce food in the festivels. The lecturer, on the other hand states that,in adduition to the presence of pieces of broken pots there are material likr stones , cement and also tools used for constriction purposes .that is indication
of these placec may be uses as acarbige for a lot of stuffs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 266.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74812030075 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43899786027 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548872180451 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 21.2450331126 155% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.5904962726 49.2860985944 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.875 110.228320801 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.25 21.698381199 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06452816374 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 4.19205298013 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.554663248631 0.272083759551 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.27343100587 0.0996497079465 274% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.192310161131 0.0662205650399 290% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319080066717 0.162205337803 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.295180918098 0.0443174109184 666% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.3589403974 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.498013245 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.