The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake The level of salt in the lake s water
The article states that several methods prevent the trend that is endangered by the lake's qualities. However, the professor explains that the ways of mentioning in the passage are a great idea but are unrealistic and impractical, refuting each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading states that special desalination equipment would help remove salt from the lake's water. The professor refutes this point by saying that lake water desalination would be making severe problems and risky afford. She illustrated that other solid materials, such as the Selenium dissolved by the desalination facility, have a toxic quality. People living near the lake breathe it, leading to a disastrous event in the lake.
Second, the article claims that diluting the salt level in the lake with water from the ocean is another option. However, the professor contends that reducing salinity requires constructing a massive pipeline
from the sea to the lake, it is costly and has not enough financial sources to accomplish such an enormous project.
Third, the reading avers that control the lake's water's salinity by constructing walls and dividing aquatics into several sections would be a firm solution to the problem. The lecturer opposes these points by saying that this project is unlikely to succeed in the long term due to geology activity. To be specific, the earthquake, maybe this solution is better in a short time, but this wall will be destroyed, and the water in lakes will be mixed.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- The following appeared in a recommendation from the planning department of the city of Transopolis."Ten years ago, as part of a comprehensive urban renewal program, the city of Transopolis adapted for industrial use a large area of severely substandard ho 50
- The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake The level of salt in the lake s water 85
- The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake The level of salt in the lake s water 85
- TOEFL TPO 17 - Integrated Writing Task 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 242.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14876033058 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62281812556 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582644628099 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7421898074 49.2860985944 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.272727273 110.228320801 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06452816374 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266488507143 0.272083759551 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10550755821 0.0996497079465 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078908622513 0.0662205650399 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143565895067 0.162205337803 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553832860118 0.0443174109184 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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