The reading passage has discussed three challenges to sending humans to Mars which have been refuted by the lecturer by presenting evidence against the conclusion of this passage. The passage discussed that sending humans to Mars is unlike to mission to the Moon as the mission to Mars would require solving various problems that were not faced by the people who went to the moon.
Firstly, the reading passage discussed that the mission to Mars can take at least two years to finish a round trip and it will be difficult to transport necessary food, water, and oxygen. Though the trip to the moon can be finished within a few days, a Mars mission is not possible without the necessary materials. However, the lecture is concerned with discussing the use of hydroponic which can help humans to grow necessary foods during their mission to marsh and recycle necessary water, and oxygen without taking food, water, and oxygen load from the earth.
Secondly, the passage outlined that astronauts on the Mars mission would have to suffer from Zero gravity problems as they would have to stay in space for a very long time. The human body can suffer from lower bone density and decreased muscle mass due to the negative effects of a zero-gravity environment. However, the lecturer provided evidence of space stations where astronauts are spending months after months without suffering many problems.
Finally, the reading passage discussed that astronauts can face the problem of space radiation due to their exposure to dangerous levels of radiation as there will be no Earth's magnetic field to protect spaceships that are traveling in interplanetary space. Moreover, creating shields to protect the spaceship is impossible due to the added heavy weight of the ship. However, the lecture has refuted this challenge by outlining the use of thin layers of material which can reduce the problem of space radiation.
To recapitulate, it can be said that the claim of passage is not substantiated if humans can use hydroponic to produce food in space, spaceships can take a rest in a zero-gravity station, and low-weight material can reduce space radiation.
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- Scientists are considering the possibility of sending humans to Mars in the coming decades Although there have been successful manned missions to the Moon in the 1960s and 1970s Mars is 150 times further away from Earth than the Moon is Thus the project o 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 342, Rule ID: HEAVY_WEIGHT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'heavyweight'?
Suggestion: heavyweight
...paceship is impossible due to the added heavy weight of the ship. However, the lecture has r...
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Line 8, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ht material can reduce space radiation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 30.3222958057 185% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1373.03311258 132% => OK
No of words: 355.0 270.72406181 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10985915493 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64966976267 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484507042254 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 419.366225166 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8402288874 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.166666667 110.228320801 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5833333333 21.698381199 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17160319991 0.272083759551 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754331090554 0.0996497079465 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801606916579 0.0662205650399 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103692911691 0.162205337803 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943651419757 0.0443174109184 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.8541721854 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.7273730684 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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