There is some disagreement between the author of the writing and the lecturer over the issue of whether sending humans to Mars would be more difficult than sending them to the Moon or not. The author states that since Mars is 150 times farther than Moon, it would introduce several issues that did not occur during the trip to the Moon, while the lecturer thinks otherwise.
The first problem according to the text is that unlike the trip to the Moon, the astronauts would need at least 2 years of food, water and oxygen and there would be simply not enough space in a spaceship to carry 2 years of supplies. The lecturer elaborates on this by introducing the idea of putting hydroponics inside the spaceship. She continues by explaining that hydroponics would take less space, and would also recycle water, providing clean water. Additionally, they would also turn carbon dioxide into fresh air. In other words, hydroponics would solve all space problems that could occur during the mission.
Secondly, the author posits that many months spent in zero gravity environment during the journey to Mars would have many negative effects on human body such as lower bone density, and it would simply make the trip impossible without having severe medical problems. The lecturer, on the other hand, rebuts this argument by stating that astronauts have found several techniques to overcome the symptoms of spending a long time in a zero gravity environment. She puts forth the idea that by exercising and taking mineral pills, astrounauts would have no trouble staying in the spaceship for a long while.
Finally, the author states that the particles released by the Sun would cause too much solar radiation for the astrounauts. The writing also notes that a shield to protect the spaceship from this radiation would be too heavy. Conversely, the lecturer refutes the aforementioned statement. She says that the Sun releases solar radiation only occasionally and argues the use of a shield for the whole spaceship could be avoided by using instruments that monitor the solar radiation and a small shielded area inside the spaceship. Astronauts would stay in the shielded area until the danger passes.
In conclusion, the lecture effectively casts doubt on all of the claims presented in the passage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...spaceship to carry 2 years of supplies. The lecturer elaborates on this by introduc...
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Line 9, column 55, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... the lecture effectively casts doubt on all of the claims presented in the passage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, at least, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 5.04856512141 337% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 30.3222958057 158% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1373.03311258 140% => OK
No of words: 380.0 270.72406181 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06578947368 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58374821677 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 145.348785872 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528947368421 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 419.366225166 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8831636173 49.2860985944 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.3125 110.228320801 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112426106364 0.272083759551 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371902094445 0.0996497079465 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597837111471 0.0662205650399 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689229103176 0.162205337803 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866973998915 0.0443174109184 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 63.6247240618 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.7273730684 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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