Both reading and lecture are about to rapid declination in the population of sea otter. The article suggests that pollution is the main cause of this serious issue and provides three reasons to supports this hypothesis. However, the lecture says predators hypothesis is dominent factor and cast doubt the points made in reading.
Firstly, according to reading increase industrial chemical pollution is the cause of otter death and this is reveal by taking sample of polluted sea water. This point is refuted by professor by saying that it is predators attack not industrial pollution. Lecture explain that if water pollution was the cause then why there is no dead body on beaches.
Secondly, auther posits that along with otter there is also other spices which have equally thretend such as sea lion, seals, which means it equally affact the entire ecosystem. In contrast, lecturer says whale are decreased population is beacuse of hunted by human and orac now prey small spices such as sea lion and seals to survive.
Finally, article points out that uneven pattern in declination in sea otter indicates that pollution distributed asymtrically due to ocean current. The more the pollution the more reduction in otter. Professor cast doubt this point by saying that odd pattern of sea otter declination is the best explanation of predators attack as it is found at certain location sea otter have negligible population which mean at this location they could easly eccess by predators.at rocky and shalow places there is no declination which means they are out of reach of predators.
In conclusion, lecture explain that sea otter decline due to predators attack beacuse no dead bodies found at beaches and big spices hunt by human so large spices prey small to survive and asymtrical pattern is due to place how easly predators can found their food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.01324503311 339% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 306.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09477124183 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54925631547 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 145.348785872 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503267973856 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.2236110994 49.2860985944 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.916666667 110.228320801 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06452816374 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184747204356 0.272083759551 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780700384435 0.0996497079465 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671772823906 0.0662205650399 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107267897836 0.162205337803 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297437067257 0.0443174109184 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.