Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.
Modern technology has changed the way people have access to information. The acceptability of different newspapers and magazines on the internet has encouraged some people to read through a computer or through a laptop. However, some others were not convinced of this new tool. While both have some advantages and disadvantages, I personally prefer to use an E-book to read.
First, an E-book is easy to use and can be carried easily anywhere. Printed newspaper and magazines may sometimes be difficult to be carried into different places and the letters are too small to be read. On the other hand, an E-book , which is always available can serve as a better purpose for readers. For example, I have a short vision problem and sometimes I don't carry my eyeglasses. In such situation, it is easier for me to read with an E-book because I can enlarge the font. Clearly, enlarging the letters allows the person to read without difficulty.Thus, using a palm top instead of a book can serve as an alternative better option.
Secondly, a person can save the information he reads on an E-book. A printed book can some times be lost and it is hard to find. On the other hand, all the information that interests a person can be stored in this new technological device and be available at any time. Moreover, a person can highlight the important information which he or she feels it is important. Thus, time saving may be of valuable importance with the use of such devices.
Finally, an E-book does not tear after being extensively use. Printed material which gets old tend to become worn and fade with time. However, E-books do not have this problem. Using an E-book instead of a printed book allows a person to read an article always as good as new. For instance, many of the old books I have are no more suitable to be read because many it papers are teared apart. generally speaking, I don't feel happy reading a glued book.
In conclusion, people are less inclined to use printed books. Using E-books are more handy, it's letters are clearer to read, and information can stored in the hard disk easily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to be read. On the other hand, an E-book , which is always available can serve as ...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... a short vision problem and sometimes I dont carry my eyeglasses. In such situation,...
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Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...s the person to read without difficulty.Thus, using a palm top instead of a book can...
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... instance, many of the old books I have are no more suitable to be read because man...
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Line 7, column 380, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'torn'.
Suggestion: torn
...e to be read because many it papers are teared apart. generally speaking, I dont feel ...
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Line 7, column 394, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Generally
...ecause many it papers are teared apart. generally speaking, I dont feel happy reading a g...
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Line 7, column 416, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...are teared apart. generally speaking, I dont feel happy reading a glued book. In ...
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Line 9, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion can stored in the hard disk easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1373.03311258 127% => OK
No of words: 368.0 270.72406181 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73097826087 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71349913087 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502717391304 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 419.366225166 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4455751513 49.2860985944 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6956521739 110.228320801 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 21.698381199 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127615234751 0.272083759551 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483763188981 0.0996497079465 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393092302221 0.0662205650399 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883996865081 0.162205337803 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550388685213 0.0443174109184 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.3589403974 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 63.6247240618 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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