Summarize the points in the lecture, being sure to explain how they address the specific ideas about solar energy described in the reading passage.
Albeit being a new technology, solar energy can provide us with a plethora of benefits. The first benefit is that it cuts off our dependance on fossil fuels, which are a non-renewable source of energy. Unlike fossil fuels, solar energy is not in danger of depletion through overuse. While production of solar panels makes use of fossil fuels, its long life span outweighs the negative impacts of this. Furthermore, solar energy is a form of clean, renewable energy, which means that the use of solar energy does not produce pollutants as it byproduct, therefore it can help preserve the health of the planet. Lastly, solar energy has lower costs as compared to fossil fuels, as the only significant expense is the initial purchase cost. Its low installation and maintenance costs cannot only help us financially, but it also eliminates the stress one faces in relation to rising prices or shortage of resources. Besides this, the privatization of solar energy can create a new income stream for people who have enough solar energy to sell it to companies, as well as provide producers with tax benefits. Given these reasons, solar energy has to be the one world's greatest ideas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1153, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one world', 'a world', or simply 'worlds'?
Suggestion: one world; a world; worlds
...ese reasons, solar energy has to be the one worlds greatest ideas.
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Line 1, column 1157, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the greatest'.
Suggestion: worlds the greatest
...reasons, solar energy has to be the one worlds greatest ideas.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 1373.03311258 71% => OK
No of words: 198.0 270.72406181 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67101058041 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3800723491 49.2860985944 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 110.228320801 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 7.06452816374 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15043623068 0.272083759551 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717964373898 0.0996497079465 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474663239508 0.0662205650399 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15043623068 0.162205337803 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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