summarize the points made in the lecture about the origin of sounds heard in north Atlantic ocean, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the hypothesis made in the reading about it.
The reading discusses the possible sources of an strange sound detected by submarines during their pass in North Atlantic and arctic ocean. However, the professor in the lecture completely disagrees with these assumptions and she gives three reasons to refute each of the mentioned theories in the reading.
First, the article talks about Orca male and female whales that are living in that area and relates the detected sound to conversations that these animals could have with each other. But, she believes that this hypothesis can not be true, since these Orca whales mostly swim near the surface of oceanic water. So, they can not be heard by submarines in deeper section of water. Also, their presence must have been revealed by sonar in the surface as they pass any of the submarines.
Second, the passage mentions the giant squids and attributes the sounds to these species which are enormous invertebrates live deep in the ocean. In contrast, professor indicates that these noises can not be originated from these animals, because the sounds started in 1960 and continued until 1980. But, after this date these noises stopped suddenly while the squids still keep on living in this habitat even until today. Thus, these sounds could not be come from these creatures, since they were collected just in that short period.
Third, the reading regards that they might be came or sent by other submarines from other countries which used to patrol in that region occasionally. On the other hand, she disputes about this intonation and illustrates that these sounds were known to came from objects that change their direction so quickly. In addition, there were no engine sounds heard by their equipment. So, they cannot be alien submarines logically, because this kind of vehicle with so little engine noise have not even invented now.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web sites. Use specific reasons and example 88
- Some people like different friends Others like similar friends Compare the advantages of these two Kinds of friends which kind of friend do you prefer 59
- summarize the points made in the lecture about Chevalier's memoir and its accuracy, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading about Chevalier's memoir. 83
- Research center is going to be established in a university. There is an argument whether to establish an agricultural center or a business one.which one do you choose? why? 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, second, so, still, third, thus, while, in addition, in contrast, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 304.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09210526316 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36175047469 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546052631579 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.971849465 49.2860985944 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06452816374 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171539115981 0.272083759551 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641731079307 0.0996497079465 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334711918368 0.0662205650399 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107456074327 0.162205337803 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177884059767 0.0443174109184 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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