summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.
What the reading passage and the lecture both debate on is whether colonizing asteroids is the best option compared to other objects in space such as our Moon and neighboring planet Mars. While the passage gives three main reasons to prove that asteroids are the reasonable option for colonization, the lecture, however, challenges the points made in the passage.
Firstly, the lecture points out that with the lower gravity humans tend to face to physical problems on asteroids, whereas the passage lists several benefits of low gravity on asteroids such as safer landing, larger capacity for the crafts, less requirement on fuels. The lecture mentions that it is scientifically proven that humans' muscle mass and bones' density would decrease in a lower gravity environment in asteroids, and it is certainly unreasonable for humans to colonize this environment and settle for long period of time.
Secondly, the lecture states that supporting mining valuable minerals and loading the raw metals back to Earth would cost a lot which will not make the mining profitable at all, while the passage mentions that the process of mining valuable metals funded by sponsors might make lots of profits. Also the lecture demonstrates that market price would decrease and do not make great profits if the supply of minerals increased.
Finally, the lecture states that even if asteroids comes nearer from the Earth than Moon or Mars from the Earth at one point as the passage mentions, thir orbiting paths are unusual and very likely to move far away from the Earth. Therefore it might be easy for colonists to land on the asteroids, but might be very difficult and unpractical for them to take off from the asteroids to return to the Earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ze this environment and settle for long period of time. Secondly, the lecture states that su...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...by sponsors might make lots of profits. Also the lecture demonstrates that market pr...
^^^^
Line 4, column 233, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...likely to move far away from the Earth. Therefore it might be easy for colonists to land ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 288.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02777777778 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54542072488 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 419.366225166 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 21.2450331126 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6563137012 49.2860985944 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.0 110.228320801 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 21.698381199 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.125 7.06452816374 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152797280771 0.272083759551 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655126520224 0.0996497079465 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394689129897 0.0662205650399 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883585632667 0.162205337803 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449317098053 0.0443174109184 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.3589403974 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 53.8541721854 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.0289183223 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.7273730684 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.498013245 156% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.