The passage describes many significant points about the Sydney Opera House. Firstly, it was selected in more than 230 major architecture designs in 1956. The building is described as unique due to its organic principles. It is perfectly suited to the environment because it has a curved roof and it seems like a sailing ship at full sail on the water situated in Bennelong Point. The design of roof is unique because of new developed design patterns.
Therefore, the lecturer stated that there are additional points to indicate this building as a masterwork for several reasons.
First reason is that the Sydney Opera House reflects the modern era of the architecture. The design contains so imaginative points and it does not reflect any style of architect schools during the building period.
Additionally, the design also reflects the new era of building. The Sydney Opera house opened a new era named the creation of computer age. The computer technology required to create the design of the roof is somewhat like that of High Tech architecture. It contains high standard of engineering and technology.
Finally, the lecturer stated that the building is one of a kind in the sense of architect.
- The Sydney Opera House. Referring to the main points in the reading passage, describe the Opera Sydney House. Then using information from both the reading and the lecture, then explains why the professor classifies the building as unique. 80
- Many people believe that it is very important to make large amount of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each view point and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position. 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 1373.03311258 74% => OK
No of words: 199.0 270.72406181 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08542713568 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8025427927 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 145.348785872 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562814070352 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2534325099 49.2860985944 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.8461538462 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.06452816374 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154656019727 0.272083759551 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583756360299 0.0996497079465 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800631117269 0.0662205650399 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764921604372 0.162205337803 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387411439358 0.0443174109184 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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