TOEFL integrated essay
The lecture and the reading are about ways to educate children.
First, the professor states that power and the withholding of affection are bat way to raize a child. To support that point, he said that the person who was raized in such conditions has a low self-estime. That opinion is straithgens in the text, by exampls of physical punishement, which can cause children to be afraid of parents.
Second, the lecture state that the management techniques are a good choice to educate. He explaines that a child who have been educated in such way become an adult with hight self-estime. Moreover, such children have better discipline. Also,the professor propose to cath a child when he does something good and to show hit support and approvel. Be that actioned, the parent can influence child to continue in that way. The professor's believe, is supported by the text, in which are examples of how someine can approve a child.
In sum, the reading bolsters the conclusion from the audio recording by mantioned points above about the effectivenes of different ways of parenting.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269607843137 0.261695866417 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.176470588235 0.158904122519 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0686274509804 0.0723426182421 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.00980392156863 0.0435111971325 23% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0147058823529 0.0277247811725 53% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117647058824 0.128828473217 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0294117647059 0.0370669169778 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76841341152 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0392156862745 0.0208969081088 188% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.132352941176 0.128158765124 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0147058823529 0.0158828679856 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0294117647059 0.0114777025283 256% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1084.0 1645.83664459 66% => OK
No of words: 181.0 271.125827815 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98895027624 6.08160592843 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.04852973271 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353591160221 0.374372842146 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.281767955801 0.287516216867 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.209944751381 0.187439937562 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.149171270718 0.113142543107 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76841341152 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 145.348785872 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580110497238 0.539623497131 108% => OK
Word variations: 52.1842930877 53.8517498576 97% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0529801325 84% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4545454545 21.7502111507 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4428030277 49.3711431718 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5454545455 132.220823453 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 21.7502111507 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.878197800319 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.39072847682 59% => OK
Readability: 44.6313410347 50.5018328374 88% => OK
Elegance: 2.07317073171 1.90840788429 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.549887131256 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114275882822 0.142949733639 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0705767366826 0.0787303798458 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.587981031769 0.631733273073 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.227862234722 0.139662658121 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.266732575781 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.103435571967 0% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.350087566323 0.414875509568 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.139951242292 0.0530846634433 264% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.40443939384 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0528353158467 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.62251655629 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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