The lecture discusses the topic of altruism which had been previously introduced in the passage. It makes various points based on the study conducted recently on meerkats as well as makes some points about humans which contradict the points that were made in the passage.
Firstly, it states that the meerkat who act as sentinels for the entire meerket group eat before the group starts searching for food. Hence the point made in the passage that meerket sentinel stands ground without any food is opposed in the lecture.
Following which the lecture also contradicts the point of the passage that sentinels are always in danger while they are protecting others. However, the lecture stated that the sentinels are most likely to be the first ones to escape as they are standing near a burrow and thus they protect themselves while the alarm cry may gather other meerkats together which may gather the predator’s attention and may put them in a dangerous situation.
Lastly, it also opposed the point of the passage in which it was believed that humans do the selfless act of organ donation and receive nothing in return. The lecture stated that after donating an organ, the person will receive appreciation or approval from others which may increase their self worth which may be important to some people.
To conclude, these are the points that are made in the lecture which opposes the points in the passage.
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Others want to stay with their families for a longer time. Which of these two you prefer and why? 68
- The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend."Of the two leading real estate firms in our town—Adams Realty and Fitch Realty—Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom 62
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition 50
- Educators should take students' interests into account when planning the content of the courses they teach.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 50
- TOEFL integrated writing: Altruism. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...re the group starts searching for food. Hence the point made in the passage that meer...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'lastly', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241245136187 0.261695866417 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.190661478599 0.158904122519 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0350194552529 0.0723426182421 48% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0505836575875 0.0435111971325 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0389105058366 0.0277247811725 140% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136186770428 0.128828473217 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0505836575875 0.0370669169778 136% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.40741081398 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0155642023346 0.0208969081088 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.140077821012 0.128158765124 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0233463035019 0.0158828679856 147% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0466926070039 0.0114777025283 407% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1428.0 1645.83664459 87% => OK
No of words: 239.0 271.125827815 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97489539749 6.08160592843 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.04852973271 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.36820083682 0.374372842146 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26359832636 0.287516216867 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163179916318 0.187439937562 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0836820083682 0.113142543107 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40741081398 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 145.348785872 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535564853556 0.539623497131 99% => OK
Word variations: 50.7191597429 53.8517498576 94% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 26.5555555556 21.7502111507 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9180510323 49.3711431718 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.666666667 132.220823453 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 21.7502111507 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 0.878197800319 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 52.9153881915 50.5018328374 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.52777777778 1.90840788429 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00698641655924 0.549887131256 1% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.166380106685 0.142949733639 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0576997679267 0.0787303798458 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.784144617217 0.631733273073 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.109485803666 0.139662658121 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00663366029758 0.266732575781 2% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.018762824722 0.103435571967 18% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.383464876937 0.414875509568 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0197565875477 0.0530846634433 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00562190198064 0.40443939384 1% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112438039613 0.0528353158467 21% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.1766004415 157% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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