TOEFL integrated writing: certifications

The article states that the wood companies in United States will not adopt and follow the requirements to obtain ecocertification and provides three reasons for support. However, the professor explains that in contrary, the American wood companies will be interested to be ecocertified and refutes each of author’s reason.

First, the reading states that American consumers are fed up with all kinds of advertising and they are not going to pay attention to ecocertification. The professor refutes this point by stating that the American consumers don’t treat every advertising in the sam...

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No. of Words: 339 250

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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 12
No. of Words: 339 250
No. of Characters: 1820 1200
No. of Different Words: 161 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.291 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.369 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.994 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 133 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 81 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.756 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.354 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.567 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.107 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4