Do you agree or disagree with "WATCHING TELEVISION IS BAD FOR CHILDREN"
In my opinion, watching television is bad for children. When I am saying this I have in my attention two main reasons.
First, watching television make the children to isolate themselves from their friends and even though from their parents or brothers. It is very well known and accepted that the big TV companies have the “gift” to create very attractive shows, series and so on. These shows act as a trap for the young mind which is absorbed by the fantastic world of the fantasy. Who does not like a captivating show? In no time the children will forget that they have friend with whom they can play games , talk, in one word socialize.
Second, big part of the television shows and promote violence. Last week I have been flipping the TV channels up and down, and at six pm, when is usual the children’s time for relaxing, on all chanels I have seen just action movie’s or even worst, horror moovies and TV shoows with violent and impropper language. Even though , if you are watching the news, which are supposed to be informative and “inocent” , they are full of news about crimes, shooting and fights.
Third, beeing daily in front of TV for a long time the children might develop bad habbits such as giving up the phisical activity which can lead to an inactive life style which will be transfferd to adult life too. As a consequence the obesity will have favorable precondition to appear. For example, when I was six years old I have a friend who used to spend a lot of her free time in fron of the TV instead of coming out with us, the children from neigheberhood. She even used to eat in front of the TV. Now, she is still watching TV all afternoon instead of going out for a walk, for example.
By way of conclusion, based on arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that in most cases it is actual more beneficial if the children would spent less time in the fron of TV and more time doing something else such as playing games togheter with odher kuds, practicing a sport or reading.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-10-16 | valentina1019 | 100 | view |
| 2023-04-10 | ckshitij51 | view | |
| 2023-04-10 | ckshitij51 | view | |
| 2023-02-21 | joyce05 | 100 | view |
| 2023-02-18 | zaid | view |
- Do you agree or disagree with the following?All young adults should be required to do some sort of national service for their country - for example military service or community service.Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 95
- Some people think that scientists make the most important contributions to society. Other the people think that the contributions of artists are the most important. Which position do you agree with? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answ 80
- Michelangelo the best artist from the renaissance period 80
- TOEFL integrated writing: Dutch painter Rembrandt 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Being able to speak well is better than being able to write well 98
Sentence: First, watching television make the children to isolate themselves from their friends and even though from their parents or brothers.
Description: The fragment television make the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
Sentence: Last week I have been flipping the TV channels up and down, and at six pm, when is usual the children's time for relaxing, on all chanels I have seen just action movie's or even worst, horror moovies and TV shoows with violent and impropper language.
Error: impropper Suggestion: improper
Error: moovies Suggestion: movies
Error: chanels Suggestion: channels
Error: shoows Suggestion: shows
Sentence: Even though , if you are watching the news, which are supposed to be informative and inocent , they are full of news about crimes, shooting and fights.
Error: inocent Suggestion: innocent
Sentence: Third, beeing daily in front of TV for a long time the children might develop bad habbits such as giving up the phisical activity which can lead to an inactive life style which will be transfferd to adult life too.
Error: beeing Suggestion: being
Error: transfferd Suggestion: transfer
Error: phisical Suggestion: physical
Error: habbits Suggestion: habits
Sentence: By way of conclusion, based on arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that in most cases it is actual more beneficial if the children would spent less time in the fron of TV and more time doing something else such as playing games togheter with odher kuds, practicing a sport or reading.
Error: kuds Suggestion: kids
Error: odher Suggestion: other
Error: togheter Suggestion: together
Error: fron Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 13 2
Sentence Length SD: 13.86 7.5
Read this link to understand What is sentence length SD:
http://www.testbig.com/question/questions-about-essay-e-rater
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 13 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 366 350
No. of Characters: 1588 1500
No. of Different Words: 208 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.374 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.339 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.363 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 90 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 71 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.86 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.562 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.319 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.557 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.095 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5