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The listening claims that the portrait was made by Rembrandt. This claim is not in agreement with that of the reading passage, which suggest that the painting of elderly women was not the work of Rembrandt as there are number of problems in this painting.
According to the lecture, examination of fur collar was done again by x ray technology and the results divulge that this luxurious fur was not the part of original painting. This extra layer was added by someone after 100 years to increase the value of painting by making it resemble to a aristrocratic lady. The passage, by contrast sugges...
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is not done by Rembrandt, who being a master painter could not have made such an error.
is not done by Rembrandt, whom being a master painter could not have made such an error.
Sentence: This extra layer was added by someone after 100 years to increase the value of painting by making it resemble to a aristrocratic lady.
Error: aristrocratic Suggestion: aristocratic
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Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 14 12
No. of Words: 323 250
No. of Characters: 1474 1200
No. of Different Words: 147 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.239 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.563 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.393 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.071 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.946 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.362 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.57 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.087 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4