TOEFL Sample essay : integrated essay from TPO 16

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TOEFL Sample essay : integrated essay from TPO 16

In this set of materials, the reading passage claims that the science of archeology has encountered serious problems and brings up three areas of this. However, the lecturer finds all the ideas dubious and provides some evidence to refute them all. She believes that the areas mentioned in the passage has improved recently based on rules and guidelines approved in 1990.

First of all, the author of the passage states that many worthwhile artifacts were destroyed by constructions in Britain. On the contrary, the lecturer asserts that all construction sites have examined by archeologi...

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Additionally, number of archeologists has improved recently.
Additionally, the number of archeologists has improved recently.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 12
No. of Words: 248 250
No. of Characters: 1358 1200
No. of Different Words: 140 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.968 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.476 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.094 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 104 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.824 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.352 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.6 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.087 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4