The reading and lecture are both about the decline of Torreya population in the state of Florida. The author of the reading talks about three ways to solve this crisis. These claims are challenged by the lecturer. She is of the opinion that the author provides no satisfactory solutions.
To begin with, the author argues that they can reestablish Torreya in the same location in which it burgeoned for thousand of years. The article mentions that Northen Florida's microclimate is very favorable to Torreya's growth. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. She notes that the climate is changig because of global warming and other causes. Additionally,she says that Torreya population would face dry climate, and could not have suitable condition to thrive.
Secondly, the author suggests that they cand solve the problem by moving Torreya to an entirely different location,far from its Florida climate. In the article, it is stated that Torreya probably thrived in areas much further north in the distant past,so by relocating it in a assisted migration, humans would simply help Torreya to survive. The lecturer, however, rebuts this claims by mentioning that the black-locust trees. She elaborates on this by bringing up the point that they spread too quickly to different location , so they are in danger of becoming extinct. As a result, this method is not good to prevent Torreya extinction.
Finnally, the author posits that preserving Torreya in reasearch centers would be good method. Morever, it is stated that seeds and saplings can be moved from the wild and preserved in a closely monitored enviroment. In contrast,the professor notes that Torreya could not be able to resist diseas. Additionally, she says that research centers do not have enough capacity to diverse species of Torreya.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...same location in which it burgeoned for thousand of years. The article mentions that Nor...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , she
...l warming and other causes. Additionally,she says that Torreya population would face...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (cand) must be used with a third-person verb: 'solves'.
Suggestion: solves
...dly, the author suggests that they cand solve the problem by moving Torreya to an ent...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , far
...orreya to an entirely different location,far from its Florida climate. In the articl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...imate. In the article, it is stated that Torreya probably thrived in areas much f...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...s much further north in the distant past,so by relocating it in a assisted migratio...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the distant past,so by relocating it in a assisted migration, humans would simply...
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Suggestion: ,
...spread too quickly to different location , so they are in danger of becoming exti...
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Suggestion:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...losely monitored enviroment. In contrast,the professor notes that Torreya could not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, in contrast, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 292.0 270.72406181 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2397260274 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75347312128 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 419.366225166 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7057451688 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.06452816374 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1534186682 0.272083759551 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479766203297 0.0996497079465 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496770048872 0.0662205650399 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945333562846 0.162205337803 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00489897613561 0.0443174109184 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 63.6247240618 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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