Both the lecture an the passage are regarding whether the memoir of Chevalier is accurate or not. Albeit the author strongly emphasizes that indeed memoir is not precise, lecturer refutes this claim by presenting several counterarguments.
Firstly, the author accentuates that in fact he was not as wealthy as he indicated in his memoir because recently, evidence emerged concerning the amount of money he borrowed from Swiss merchant. Thus, the author deems that a person who is wealthy does not need to borrow money. However, the lecturer contradicts this statement by asserting that Chevalier had to convert his money to the cash, and it too long for the cash to arrive, so Chevalier borrowed some money for gambling until his money arrived.
Secondly, the author mentions that critics are also very skeptical concerning the accuracy of conversations between Chevalier and prominent writer Voltaire. Even though the author has no doubt that they met each other, he is not convinced regarding the precision of the dialogues, for it is not feasible that Chevalier can not recall all sentences he had long before. That being said, the lecturer rebuts this claim by demonstrating proof. The lecturer accentuates that Chevalier used to write his conversations with Voltaire instantly after finishing, so it is quite plausible that he exactly remembered each sentence.
Thirdly, the author states that Chevalier escaped the prison by giving bribe rather than by utilizing a piece of metal to make hole in the ceiling and climbing through the roof. Besides, Chevalier had a decent connection with political figures, so he may get help from them. On the other hand, the lecturer opposes this opinion by posting that they were some people in the prison who had more powerful connections, but unlike Chevalier they couldn't escape. In addition to it, document was found, which displayed that after the escape of Chevalier ceiling had to be mend, so if Chevalier used bribery for escaping, why the ceiling in the court of Chevalier had to be repaired.
- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following question? Educating children is more difficult nowadays than in the past due to cell phones, websites, games and alike. 89
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers have to give difficult tasks to students. 67
- Like many creatures, humpback whales migrate long distances for feeding and mating purposes. How animals manage to migrate long distances is often puzzling. In the case of humpback whales, we may have found the answer: they may be navigating by the stars, 86
- From which one you get more knowledge: Books or experiences. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
Both the lecture an the passage are regarding whether the m...
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Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: an; the
Both the lecture an the passage are regarding whether the memoi...
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Line 4, column 442, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... connections, but unlike Chevalier they couldnt escape. In addition to it, document was...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, in addition, in fact, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1373.03311258 125% => OK
No of words: 334.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12574850299 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72168039877 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550898203593 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 419.366225166 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6459269948 49.2860985944 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.692307692 110.228320801 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06452816374 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208615248708 0.272083759551 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739297519423 0.0996497079465 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477731961258 0.0662205650399 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129128423079 0.162205337803 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227337970954 0.0443174109184 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.3589403974 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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