TPO-01 - Integrated Writing Task In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay inorder to do so. A mandatory policy requiri
The article discusses a fascinating topic pertaining to shortening of workweek of the employees from five days to four days and provides three explanations for supporting this change. However, the lecturer casts doubt on the claims made by the writer, saying that his arguments are somewhat inaccurate when compared to real facts.
To begin with, the reading passage claims that this amendment increases the company’s profits by mentioning that if the companies shorten the workweek, then employees fell rested more. As a result, they become less error-prone worker in their job and they produce more qualified product. Moreover, he adds that company can hire more worker with the same money and can do more jobs than ever before which increases the profits.The professor repudiates this point by saying that even if the companies hire more worker, it will be more costly for the companies because the more new worker you hire, the more spending on the traning for these workers is. Furthermore, he claims that hiring new workers also means allocating extra office spaces and extra computer for the new workers and these are important costs to afford for a company.
Secondly, the writer suggest that this change is benefical for the society as a whole by stating that if the workload decreases, then this shortened workload would have to be shifted to other workers and this results in less unemployment. The lecturer,however, rebuts this by mentioning that hiring new worker may be more costly for companies rather than being more profitable and also may have no effect on the unemployment. He elaborates on this by bringing up the point that companies may expect the same amount of job from workers at the duration of shortened days and this will be more tiring for employess but it won’t effect the unemployment rate.
Final discrepancy between the article and the class discussion is about the benefit of this application for an individual employee. In the article it is stated that after this regulation employees can find more time to spend this time with their families and also to spend for pursuing their private interests. The lecturer opposes this point by explaining that if the workers have less time with their job then it is hard to develop their career for the employees. He also states that in this environment, they may lose the opportunity to promote in the management positions because employers may choose the employees for a managerial position who prefer to working five days to working four days.
- 19-)Two years ago, radio station WCQP in Rockville decided to increase the number of call-in advice programs that it broadcast; since that time, its share of the radio audience in the Rockville listening area has increased significantly. Given WCQP's 73
- topic: shortening the employees workweek to 4 days instead of five days 83
- 27-)“The best way to teach — whether as an educator, employer, or parent — is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.”Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and su 50
- shortened work week 3
- 8-)“Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.”Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worker' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worker
...Moreover, he adds that company can hire more worker with the same money and can do more job...
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Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worker' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worker
...on the idea that even if companies hire more worker, it will be more costly for the compani...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 646, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'work'?
Suggestion: work
...for a managerial position who prefer to working five days to working four days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, in contrast, as a result, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 22.412803532 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2208.0 1373.03311258 161% => OK
No of words: 452.0 270.72406181 167% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88495575221 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.04702891845 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54818087686 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 145.348785872 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449115044248 0.540411800872 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 419.366225166 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3289491187 49.2860985944 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06452816374 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374671526624 0.272083759551 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117213925234 0.0996497079465 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637251397651 0.0662205650399 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240099771565 0.162205337803 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247642091279 0.0443174109184 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 63.6247240618 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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