The passage states that Employees should work four days workweek rather than five days a week and provides two reasons of support.However,the professor explains that, by doing so the companies get affected to their economic condition and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First,the reading claims that workweek would increase company profit because employees would feel more rested and alert.The professor refutes this point by saying that the company would decrease their profit by spending more money to hiring new employees.As company would hire new employees,they have to spend more money on training and medical benefits.He states that, Companies have to provide more office space and more computers to the new employees.
Second,the passage posits that it would reduce unemployement rates.If many employees work load are more than it would shifted to the other employees.However,the professor says that the company will ask to their employees to do work for five days rather than four days workweek.According to the professor there are more jobs available in the market.Companies might raise their expectation by doing ask their employees to work overtime.
Third the reading says that the option of a four-day workweek would be better for individual employees because Employees who could afford a lower salary in exchange for more free time could improve the quality of their lives by spending the extra time with their families, pursuing private interests, or enjoying leisure activities.The professor opposes this point by explaining that If it will happen than it would reduce quality life and employees would loose their jobs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eek and provides two reasons of support.However,the professor explains that, by doing s...
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... provides two reasons of support.However,the professor explains that, by doing so th...
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...es each of the authors reasons. First,the reading claims that workweek would incr...
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...ims that workweek would increase company profit because employees would feel more...
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...loyees would feel more rested and alert.The professor refutes this point by saying ...
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...ding more money to hiring new employees.As company would hire new employees,they h...
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...yees.As company would hire new employees,they have to spend more money on training an...
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... money on training and medical benefits.He states that, Companies have to provide ...
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...omputers to the new employees. Second,the passage posits that it would reduce une...
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...hat it would reduce unemployement rates.If many employees work load are more than ...
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...hat it would reduce unemployement rates.If many employees work load are more than ...
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...it would shifted to the other employees.However,the professor says that the company wil...
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...d shifted to the other employees.However,the professor says that the company will as...
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...ive days rather than four days workweek.According to the professor there are more jobs av...
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...e are more jobs available in the market.Companies might raise their expectation by doing ...
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...terests, or enjoying leisure activities.The professor opposes this point by explain...
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
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...reduce quality life and employees would loose their jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 255.0 270.72406181 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47450980392 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00875053419 2.5805825403 117% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521568627451 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 63.0 21.2450331126 297% => Sentence length is too long
Sentence length SD: 79.1549114079 49.2860985944 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 349.0 110.228320801 317% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.75 21.698381199 294% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06452816374 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 4.19205298013 406% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.577696669175 0.272083759551 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.374456990099 0.0996497079465 376% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121139247971 0.0662205650399 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.374456990099 0.162205337803 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121139247971 0.0443174109184 273% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.2 13.3589403974 271% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.53 53.8541721854 14% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.0289183223 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.2367328918 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.42419426049 125% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 10.7273730684 247% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.498013245 259% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.2008830022 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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