The reading passage states that the policy requiring companies to offer employees to work a four-day and provide tree reasons of support. However, the professor explains that this changing will have negative effect on employees and companies profits.
According to the lecture the professor told that for day week will reduce profits, economics and life qualities of employees. Firstly, companies will spent a lot of money on medical insurances and trainings for new workers.Moreover, for new workers company must organize work's places that require a big count of money. Secondly, a short week will not allow to hire a workers, because companies do not have enough resources for it. That is why workers will do the same count of work during for days week. Finally, employees will have more free time that can increase a risk for their life and they can lost their professional skills during long weekends. It will have negative effect on their career.
In contrast, the author explains that this changing will have a lot of advantages. First of all, the shortened workweek would increase company profits,because workers will have more time for a rest. Secondly, this innovation would reduce unemployment rates.Workers will shift to other Last but not least, this option will be better for individual workers. They will have free time to improve their quality spending extra time with relatives and enjoying different activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...s of employees. Firstly, companies will spent a lot of money on medical insurances an...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...nsurances and trainings for new workers.Moreover, for new workers company must organize ...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'hiring'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: hiring
.... Secondly, a short week will not allow to hire a workers, because companies do not hav...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a worker' or simply 'workers'?
Suggestion: a worker; workers
...ly, a short week will not allow to hire a workers, because companies do not have enough r...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...ease a risk for their life and they can lost their professional skills during long w...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
... workweek would increase company profits,because workers will have more time for a rest....
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Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Workers
...ovation would reduce unemployment rates.Workers will shift to other Last but not least,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.4613686534 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 5.04856512141 337% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 230.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23913043478 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73256978285 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 145.348785872 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55652173913 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7788704907 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.416666667 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06452816374 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422466134384 0.272083759551 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157464268454 0.0996497079465 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652477600988 0.0662205650399 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287461837131 0.162205337803 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161664393371 0.0443174109184 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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