The reading passage talks about employee typically work five days a week for eight hours each day However many employee want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay in order to do. However the lecture cast serious doubt on this claim by presenting some counter arguments and examples. He believes that model job have benefit for company but employee has hard situation.
First of all, she argues that employee have force to spent more and they spent more money for train and bus or gas so 5 days a week have many benefit and this decided cut profit for company. this, however, in contrast the passage claims that a mandatory policy require companies to offer their employees the option of working a four-day workweek for four –fifths of their normal pay would benefit the economy as a whole as well as the individual companies and the employees who decided to take the option.
Moreover, it is noted in the reading passage the shortened workweek would increase company profits because employees would feel more rested and alert and as a result, they would make fewer costly errors in their work.in contrast the lecture clearly states that if I follow 4 days a week people can be available in per week and if one person work 4 day company can increase expectation but in Fridays employee is tired and this job created company unpleasant.
Finally, the speaker points out that 4 week in a week have risk and it reduce quality so decrease employee’s ability so as a result in the economic turn down maybe lose their job. And they can choose 5 day a workweek then manage their live. Nevertheless, the text asserts that the option of a four-day a workweek would be better for individual employee. They could afford a lower salary in exchange for more free time could improve the quality of their lives by spending the extra time with their families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ling to accept less pay in order to do. However the lecture cast serious doubt on this ...
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Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many benefits'.
Suggestion: many benefits
...in and bus or gas so 5 days a week have many benefit and this decided cut profit for company...
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Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...nd this decided cut profit for company. this, however, in contrast the passage claim...
^^^^
Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
Suggestion: reduces
... that 4 week in a week have risk and it reduce quality so decrease employee's abi...
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Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e employee's ability so as a result in the economic turn down maybe lose the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, well, in contrast, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 328.0 270.72406181 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73780487805 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42038610299 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 145.348785872 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 419.366225166 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 21.2450331126 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.398819924 49.2860985944 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.4 110.228320801 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8 21.698381199 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9 7.06452816374 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.68597978383 0.272083759551 252% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.259279007262 0.0996497079465 260% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157281191895 0.0662205650399 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.431753033771 0.162205337803 266% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067945824924 0.0443174109184 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.498013245 141% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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