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The article states that,employees want to work for a four day. However, the professor explains that this posses a higher risk and refutes each of the authors reasons
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , employees
The article states that,employees want to work for a four day. However, t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...y. However, the professor explains that this posses a higher risk and refutes each o...
^^^^
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and refutes each of the authors reasons
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 10.4613686534 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 22.412803532 13% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 30.3222958057 7% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 142.0 1373.03311258 10% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 28.0 270.72406181 10% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.30032663379 4.04702891845 57% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 2.75069564485 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 25.0 145.348785872 17% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.892857142857 0.540411800872 165% => OK
syllable_count: 39.6 419.366225166 9% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 13.0662251656 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.0 49.2860985944 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.0 110.228320801 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 21.698381199 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208769431194 0.272083759551 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163902981309 0.0996497079465 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146328200731 0.0662205650399 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208769431194 0.162205337803 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.3589403974 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 53.8541721854 138% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 5.55761589404 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.0289183223 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.42419426049 125% => OK
difficult_words: 11.0 63.6247240618 17% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.2008830022 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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