TPO-02 - Integrated Writing Task In many organizations, perhaps the best way to approach certain new projects is to assemble a group of people into a team. Having a team of people attack a project offers several advantages. First of all, a group of people

The reading is all about what are the different advantages what team work can achieve if they work together.In other words, team work always provide better results as compare to individual performing and task.But there are various disadvantages which the author claims.
First of all, there are many people involved in project work and they will have good knowledge, expertise and appropriate skills which will help people to contribute appropriately .The author oppose this by stating that even though there are many people involved in the team, but there are few real contributors to the project.Because, of these real contributors project lead to higher results.
Secondly, if we are facing many issues than creative solutions can be acquired if group of people are working in same project. Remarkable efficient strategies can be implement to find solutions for risky task.For instance, as team work may involve many meeting and discussion as there are many people along with that they too have different mindset.This would create conflict between teammates.
Third, it also states that group of people contribute much more as compare to a person who works alone.Instead, if team members are not agreed with the possible solution team will have to drop the idea and stop execution of the project

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...elp people to contribute appropriately .The author oppose this by stating that even...
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...to contribute appropriately .The author oppose this by stating that even though there ...
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...re few real contributors to the project.Because, of these real contributors project lea...
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...re few real contributors to the project.Because, of these real contributors project lea...
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...lement to find solutions for risky task.For instance, as team work may involve many...
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...th that they too have different mindset.This would create conflict between teammates...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, for instance, first of all, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1373.03311258 80% => OK
No of words: 209.0 270.72406181 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24880382775 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76474715579 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602870813397 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 21.2450331126 193% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.616353578 49.2860985944 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 219.4 110.228320801 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.8 21.698381199 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.6 7.06452816374 277% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432393789792 0.272083759551 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.239659983679 0.0996497079465 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052096477401 0.0662205650399 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257401258073 0.162205337803 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626108246042 0.0443174109184 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 13.3589403974 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 53.8541721854 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.0289183223 175% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.2367328918 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 10.7273730684 275% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.498013245 175% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 11.2008830022 268% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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