The reading and the lecture are both about making a team when dealing about a project. The author of the reading believes having a group in doing project has more benefits. The lecture casts doubt the point that the reading made. He thinks that the team for a project has not any positive effect.
First of all, the reading thinks that a group can have wider range of knowledge, and skills by having diverse people. Reading expects that the group of team can work quickly and have highly creative solution when they have problems. The lecture opposes the points that the reading made. The group with large member is hard to make agreement at the same time.
Secondly, the author points out that they can make the decision even though they are able to have risks because they feel better when they are group;but, the lecturer says that even though some of the people in the group mainly affect when they are making decision, all of the member in the group need to be responsible if the result goes wrong.
Finally, the reading believes that having a group is rewarding for member of team. If they work well in one group, they can have a chance to shine. However, the lecturer says that if some of the members work hard, that can let the other members to have a ride by having the people who can work instead of them.
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- Sea otters are a small mammal that lives in the waters along North America s west coast from California to Alaska A few years ago some of the sea otter populations off of the Alaskan coast started to decline rapidly and raised several concerns because of 63
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- In 1957 a European silver coin dating to the eleventh century was discovered at a Native American archaeological site in the state of Maine in the United States Many people believed the coin had been originally brought to North America by European explor 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oup in doing project has more benefits. The lecture casts doubt the point that the ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a project has not any positive effect. First of all, the reading thinks that a ...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...but, the lecturer says that even though some of the people in the group mainly affect when ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...y affect when they are making decision, all of the member in the group need to be responsi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ine. However, the lecturer says that if some of the members work hard, that can let the oth...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 1373.03311258 79% => OK
No of words: 240.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52916666667 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01845220542 2.5805825403 78% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 145.348785872 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4625 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.2910714263 49.2860985944 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5833333333 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06452816374 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436089788868 0.272083759551 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171406873194 0.0996497079465 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969210182938 0.0662205650399 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281999093287 0.162205337803 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665216482313 0.0443174109184 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.3589403974 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 53.8541721854 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.2367328918 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.42419426049 81% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 63.6247240618 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.