In the reading author express three advantages for assembling people in a group to finish a project. In the lecture professor refutes all these advantages.
First, reading says in a team so many knowledge, skills and expertise collect together that cause a great force to accomplish a project. Professor refutes this by expressing that in a team some member don't work hard and against them some other try very hard and provide a great successfulness opportunity for grupe but at the end they will be unsatisfied.
Second, passage claims in a group project implement quickly because of duty dividing between them and easier problem solving. Professor again disagree and says a team project proceed harder and consumes more time because having a compromise between team members with different idea isn't easy.
Third, author says in a team goals are greater and affect member's life in a significant ways that cause they shine. Professor says some more influential member in a group who can affect and manage others to handle project in a specific manner may cause project proceed in a false way and force other groups to act according to their ideas. At the end by project failing all members are considered guilty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 34, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...ages. First, reading says in a team so many knowledge, skills and expertise collect...
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Line 2, column 34, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much knowledge', 'a good deal of knowledge'.
Suggestion: much knowledge; a good deal of knowledge
...ages. First, reading says in a team so many knowledge, skills and expertise collect together ...
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Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ect together that cause a great force to accomplish a project. Professor refutes ...
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Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y expressing that in a team some member dont work hard and against them some other t...
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Line 2, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess opportunity for grupe but at the end they will be unsatisfied. Second, passa...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed harder and consumes more time because having a compromise between team members...
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Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...etween team members with different idea isnt easy. Third, author says in a team go...
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Line 4, column 30, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'goal'?
Suggestion: goal
...nt easy. Third, author says in a team goals are greater and affect members life in ...
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Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...nd affect members life in a significant ways that cause they shine. Professor says s...
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Line 4, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a group who can affect and manage others to handle project in a specific manner m...
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Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a specific manner" with adverb for "specific"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ct and manage others to handle project in a specific manner may cause project proceed in a false wa...
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Line 4, column 271, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a false way" with adverb for "false"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ecific manner may cause project proceed in a false way and force other groups to act according...
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Line 4, column 383, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t the end by project failing all members are considered guilty.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'third']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.287037037037 0.261695866417 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.158904122519 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0925925925926 0.0723426182421 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0324074074074 0.0435111971325 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0231481481481 0.0277247811725 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12037037037 0.128828473217 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0462962962963 0.0370669169778 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.612667822 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0231481481481 0.0208969081088 111% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.115740740741 0.128158765124 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0138888888889 0.0158828679856 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00925925925926 0.0114777025283 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1222.0 1645.83664459 74% => OK
No of words: 203.0 271.125827815 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0197044335 6.08160592843 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.04852973271 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.399014778325 0.374372842146 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.290640394089 0.287516216867 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142857142857 0.187439937562 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103448275862 0.113142543107 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.612667822 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 145.348785872 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581280788177 0.539623497131 108% => OK
Word variations: 54.6486707398 53.8517498576 101% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5555555556 21.7502111507 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4153468307 49.3711431718 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.777777778 132.220823453 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 21.7502111507 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.878197800319 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.39072847682 383% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.6195949644 50.5018328374 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.04166666667 1.90840788429 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418708799288 0.549887131256 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113064917804 0.142949733639 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0618850595068 0.0787303798458 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.649398025391 0.631733273073 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147785555644 0.139662658121 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181948917294 0.266732575781 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470089307614 0.103435571967 45% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.202858251967 0.414875509568 49% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0298775823459 0.0530846634433 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263853983711 0.40443939384 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384680426695 0.0528353158467 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.26048565121 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.49668874172 200% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.