In this set of material is discussed about the tidal power as an alternative way to produce energy. However the lecture refutes the belief in the reading passage and is cast doubt.
Fist of all, is mentioned in the reading passage the fact that the tidal power is a great technology which must exploit the potential. Besides, is considering this system as a non-polluting renewable technology that furthermore, contributes to the environment because does not produce dangerous gases. In addition, the energy formed by tides could be the solution in order is not used fossil fuel reserves.
Nevertheless, contrary with the passage, the lecture pointed out that this system has several implications to the local ecosystem and economy. Firstly, is mentioned the impact of the water quality by affecting the local life on the sea, to be specific the fish diversity and paralysis in many aquatic creatures, this is because the salinity is increased when the tidal power is used Secondly, can be destroyed the habitats of birds. Fish migration patterns are affected owing to, the fishes can not be able to pass through the barrage freely. Finally the economy in the local people decreases due to the fishing boats no are able to navigate in those areas.
For these reasons must be considered the tidal power as a potential way of energy production.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...s an alternative way to produce energy. However the lecture refutes the belief in the r...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ble to pass through the barrage freely. Finally the economy in the local people decreas...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257142857143 0.261695866417 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.159183673469 0.158904122519 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10612244898 0.0723426182421 147% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0367346938776 0.0435111971325 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0277247811725 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.110204081633 0.128828473217 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0489795918367 0.0370669169778 132% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7385545681 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0326530612245 0.0208969081088 156% => OK
Particles: 0.00408163265306 0.00154638098197 264% => OK
Determiners: 0.163265306122 0.128158765124 127% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0204081632653 0.0158828679856 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0122448979592 0.0114777025283 107% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1355.0 1645.83664459 82% => OK
No of words: 224.0 271.125827815 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04910714286 6.08160592843 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.04852973271 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.370535714286 0.374372842146 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.308035714286 0.287516216867 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.196428571429 0.187439937562 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138392857143 0.113142543107 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7385545681 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575892857143 0.539623497131 107% => OK
Word variations: 55.732223891 53.8517498576 103% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0529801325 77% => OK
Sentence length: 22.4 21.7502111507 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0476993401 49.3711431718 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 132.220823453 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 21.7502111507 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 0.878197800319 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.39072847682 59% => OK
Readability: 53.2035714286 50.5018328374 105% => OK
Elegance: 2.125 1.90840788429 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.524782995872 0.549887131256 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147969131582 0.142949733639 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0865357716461 0.0787303798458 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.708901179974 0.631733273073 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122547086981 0.139662658121 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.278636935643 0.266732575781 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796843151581 0.103435571967 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.417429589024 0.414875509568 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.161121001439 0.0530846634433 304% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.372241487415 0.40443939384 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987028827085 0.0528353158467 187% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.26048565121 23% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.