I agree, based on my experience I consider that childhood is the happiest time of a person’s life. My childhood is filled of several experiences that made of me the person that today I am. I learned about the life how to overcome struggles through the childhood my mother taught me discipline. I enjoyed each moment and adventures, If I could return the time, it will be fantastic to me. There are some points to say that childhood is the happiest time.
Firstly, this is the stage in the life when you discover everything. For instance, I remember when I was a little girl; I enjoyed researching and prove my own theories. Maybe, does not was a great discover, nevertheless to me it was the beginning of my life as a scientific woman. The persistence was built at this stage of my life, it was important to me because I suddenly celebrated the first fantastic achievements in my researching life.
Secondly, on the childhood you get the first remembers and all the moments you live with a lot enthusiasm. For example, in Christmas time was so expected about the arrival of Santa Claus and the gift to me were more magic that today. I remember the how emotion was that moments, the last night before Christmas I cannot sleep, I was happy that all days were even longer than today. Nowadays my life is really good, however those moments were unforgettable and glorious, what a wonderful years.
Thirdly, you can live without concern. In other words, you have not worried about electrician bills, rent or another kind of payments. When you were buying a candy, almost never thought in the money spent, only request your mother for this. The status in the life, no was important; in fact that the term does not mean anything to you. Childhood was definitely the best time in the life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
... were more magic that today. I remember the how emotion was that moments, the last nigh...
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Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'year'?
Suggestion: year
...gettable and glorious, what a wonderful years. Thirdly, you can live without conc...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...other for this. The status in the life, no was important; in fact that the term do...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.210526315789 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.149584487535 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0747922437673 0.0866891130778 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0498614958449 0.046263068375 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.105263157895 0.0685040099705 154% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.105263157895 0.118717715034 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0221606648199 0.0351676179071 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69569734377 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0193905817175 0.0309702414327 63% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.113573407202 0.0887237588012 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.01108033241 0.0209618222197 53% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0193905817175 0.0139019557991 139% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1797.0 2387.08602151 75% => OK
No of words: 316.0 408.028673835 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68670886076 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.310126582278 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224683544304 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174050632911 0.174417080927 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123417721519 0.112833075102 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69569734377 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54746835443 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 57.8198149122 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5555555556 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.175342625 48.84282405 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8333333333 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 40.0239099859 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.10909090909 1.45489161554 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286219394971 0.300154397459 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129308250005 0.103427244359 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0944749779372 0.0752933317313 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.533636628285 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134361985155 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12504319149 0.114077575197 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071213009166 0.0781384742642 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.342034872996 0.336927656856 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0245964253048 0.067059652881 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210068533824 0.210909579961 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396809394839 0.0618886996521 64% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.