The second reason for remaining friend with old one is time consumpion. Due to the fact that you do not need extra time to be familiar with different behaviour of your friend you are able to handle difficulties in your friendship better than before.
Also, old friends have more knowledge about you so you are able to trust on them and cooperate with them in your problems. For instance, having money problem, one is able to take guide and help from his or her old friends rather than new fiends that does not know you as well.
The last reason that taking old friend can attracting new friends. In fact, taking old friends away will make you so many problems in facing with new ones. For example, classmates, who are following your behaviour in front of your old friend, can understand the future behaviour that you may have. On the other hand, your relationship with old friends demonstrates your future behaviour. In fact, lack of old friends not only distort your face in front of new students but also will prevent you to comunicate with new students in your job or the college.
In conclusion, Old friends can accompany you in difficult conditions because they are familiar with your behaviour. Altough your decisions can be effective if you cooperate with more friends, the old one are more capable to recognise the true decision according to your ability. Also, people that have retained their old friends are able to remain with new people as friends. As a result, the more friend you have the higher you are able to face the new conditions so that you can handle more difficult situations.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.209150326797 0.261695866417 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.147058823529 0.158904122519 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.130718954248 0.0723426182421 181% => Less adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0522875816993 0.0435111971325 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.101307189542 0.0277247811725 365% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140522875817 0.128828473217 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0261437908497 0.0370669169778 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.45851031301 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0326797385621 0.0208969081088 156% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0392156862745 0.128158765124 31% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0261437908497 0.0158828679856 165% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00980392156863 0.0114777025283 85% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1602.0 1645.83664459 97% => OK
No of words: 280.0 271.125827815 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72142857143 6.08160592843 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.04852973271 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3 0.374372842146 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.221428571429 0.287516216867 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167857142857 0.187439937562 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117857142857 0.113142543107 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45851031301 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467857142857 0.539623497131 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.5578931821 53.8517498576 83% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0529801325 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5384615385 21.7502111507 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0704438991 49.3711431718 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.230769231 132.220823453 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 21.7502111507 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.878197800319 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 43.6813186813 50.5018328374 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.25 1.90840788429 65% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252297813848 0.549887131256 46% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.157407458559 0.142949733639 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0589954827342 0.0787303798458 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.600502540292 0.631733273073 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124907034956 0.139662658121 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125326852836 0.266732575781 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610531443924 0.103435571967 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.354672487483 0.414875509568 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0877849156715 0.0530846634433 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190547993176 0.40443939384 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494227617772 0.0528353158467 94% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.26048565121 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.49668874172 172% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.62251655629 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 10.2958057395 58% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.