The article states that theories that support the use of the buildings in the settlements of Chaco Canyon and provides three of suppor. Conversely, the professor states that none of these theories is convincing and he refutes each of the author’s reasons.
First, the reading avers that the Chaco structures were residential, with each housing hundreds of people. The professor agrees that the structures from outside may seem like the well-known apartment buildings at Taos, New mexico. But, he says that from the design from inside it opposes this theory. If hundreds people were living there, fire places should have found there too. Because, people used them for cooking. But, a few fireplaces found there for about 10 families, despite of the fact that structures have enough rooms for hundreds. This idea clearly proof that the Chaco Canyon structures could not have been residential.
Second, the article claims that the Chaco structures used to store food supplies, such as grain maize. The professor, on the other hand, refutes this point by explaining this theory is not supported by evidence. The structures have enough space to store food, however, researchers did not find either traces for maize nor did they find containers of grain maize. Therefore, if they did not discover any spills and remain of big containers, it clearly proof that the structures were used for storage food supplies at all.
Third, the reading posits that the houses used as ceremonial centers,broken pots that have been discovered supports this theory. However, the professor opposes this point by stating that this theory is not well supported. He explains that the mound that discovered, in one house of the Chaco Structures, contain other materials that unexpectedly to be found in ceremonial centers. For example, huge quantities of construction materials, like sand, and construction tools too. The professor adds that this place could have been a trash place for construction materials. Also, broken pots could be regular trash from construction workers, such as their meals. And so, the professor concludes this theory has not good evidence to proof that the houses were used for special ceremonies.
- TPO-01 - Integrated Writing Task In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay inorder to do so. A mandatory policy requiri 80
- TPO-25 - Integrated Writing Task In 1938 an archaeologist in Iraq acquired a set of clay jars that had been excavated two years earlier by villagers constructing a railroad line. The vessel was about 2,200 years old. Each clay jay contained a copper cylin 80
- TPO-27 - Integrated Writing Task The little ice age was a period of unusually cold temperature in many parts of the world that lasted from about the year 1350 until 1900CE. There were unusually harsh winters, and glaciers grew larger in many areas. Scient 78
- TPO-16 - Integrated Writing Task The United Kingdom (sometimes referred to as Britain) has a long and rich history of human settlement. Traces of buildings, tools, and art can be found from periods going back many thousands of years: from the Stone Age, t 95
- TPO-15 - Integrated Writing Task The cane toad is a large (1.8 kg) amphibian species native to Central and South America. It was deliberately introduced to Australia in 1935 with the expectation that it would protect farmers' crops by eating harmful insec 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'proofs'?
Suggestion: proofs
...nd remain of big containers, it clearly proof that the structures were used for stora...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , broken
...at the houses used as ceremonial centers,broken pots that have been discovered supports...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 448, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es of construction materials, like sand, and construction tools too. The professo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, well, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1373.03311258 136% => OK
No of words: 352.0 270.72406181 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28977272727 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68253433235 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 145.348785872 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511363636364 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 419.366225166 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5954388378 49.2860985944 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 7.06452816374 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428228829557 0.272083759551 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12990404696 0.0996497079465 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616388537051 0.0662205650399 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245832188137 0.162205337803 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778061034415 0.0443174109184 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 63.6247240618 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.