TPO-07 - Integrated Writing Task In an effort to encourage ecologically sustainable forestry practices, an international organization started issuing certifications to wood companies that meet high ecological standards by conserving resources and recyclin

The reading passage states that an international organization gives certification to companies that work with wood but the customers in the United States would not have interest to a ecocertification. However the lecturer claims American people would give their attention to certificated items with an evidence.

First, the author of reading passage believes American customers do not care about ecocertification. ın contrast, the lecturer says that American customers can distinguish to buy variety of products with their evidence of certification.

Second, the reading says with an ecocertification wood will be more expensive because of the cost of the certification and Americans tend to be motivate with low prices. Conversely, the lecturer states if there is only a little difference between ecocertificated and non-certificate woods, like only 5 percent, customers would definitely choose the certificated one.

Third, the reading claims that America is not keeping up with developments as it is known. Also American wood companies sell in the United States only. However, the lecturer says there would be more customers interested in ecocertification and before the foreign companies start to sell it in America, domestic companies should start having ecocertificate.

To sum up, the reading passage believes the ceritification is not really a significant evidence for wood and Americans do not demand to buy ecocertificated woods. However, the lecturer asserts that with a proof of quality, American wood companies would sell more and it definitely takes the customers attention as an improvment.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nited States would not have interest to a ecocertification. However the lecturer ...
^
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ot have interest to a ecocertification. However the lecturer claims American people wou...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ers do not care about ecocertification. ın contrast, the lecturer says that Americ...
^^
Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ng up with developments as it is known. Also American wood companies sell in the Uni...
^^^^
Line 9, column 292, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...d sell more and it definitely takes the customers attention as an improvment.
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, if, really, second, so, third, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.01324503311 319% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 242.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69834710744 5.08290768461 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42015235254 2.5805825403 133% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 145.348785872 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487603305785 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 419.366225166 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.55342163355 122% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6633804431 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.363636364 110.228320801 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432052153943 0.272083759551 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188115431845 0.0996497079465 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779190727061 0.0662205650399 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265346681573 0.162205337803 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509402738143 0.0443174109184 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.3589403974 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 53.8541721854 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.0289183223 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.2367328918 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.2008830022 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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