The reading talks about sustainable forestry practices which mentioned that USA government issuing a certification to wood companies for encourage them in their wood products. The lecturer, on the other hand casts doubts on all claims mentioned in the article.
First of all, the article states that American consumers would not value or even pay attention to the certification label. And as the same way they do not keep their trust much on advertising. However, the professor refuse well consumers do not trust all advertising. He argues that consumers the same way distinguish their own products and also American consumers have high confidence in independent consumer agency.
Second, the writer states that ecocertified wood companies may increase the price of their products due to they are suppose to pay for achieving the certificate which lead the price high. on contrary, the lecturer claims that studies shows only price can determine the consumers decision. furthermore, he argues For example, if the price between two products are small about five percent they would do chose the low price ahead.
Finally, the article suggests that people people believes that it always makes good business sense to keep up in the improvement. But it does not work due to the American people sells their products in the USA country. However, the professor says that if woods companies motivate their self for appealing about certificate they would get high rates of benefits when they exports their products abroad. He puts forth that business man should focus on international business career across the world.
- TPO-47 - Integrated Writing Task Pterosaurs were an ancient group of winged reptiles that lived alongside the dinosaurs. Many pterosaurs were very large, some as large as a giraffe and with a wingspan of over 12 meters. Paleontologists have long wondered 73
- TPO-05 - Integrated Writing Task As early as the twelfth century A.D., the settlements of Chaco Canyon in New Mexico in the American Southwest were notable for their "great houses," massive stone buildings that contain hundreds of rooms and often stand th 71
- TPO-21 - Integrated Writing Task Genetic modification, a process used to change an organism’s genes and hence its characteristics, is now being used to improve trees through genetic modification. It is possible to create trees that produce more fruit, g 80
- TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...price of their products due to they are suppose to pay for achieving the certificate wh...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
... certificate which lead the price high. on contrary, the lecturer claims that stud...
^^
Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...e can determine the consumers decision. furthermore, he argues For example, if the price be...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: people
...ad. Finally, the article suggests that people people believes that it always makes good busi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 371, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'export'
Suggestion: export
...ld get high rates of benefits when they exports their products abroad. He puts forth th...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, well, for example, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.4613686534 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 258.0 270.72406181 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25581395349 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68137506688 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554263565891 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 419.366225166 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8296669188 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.307692308 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06452816374 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46648841122 0.272083759551 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149642805095 0.0996497079465 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891416408384 0.0662205650399 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26503101432 0.162205337803 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319183732461 0.0443174109184 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.