Both the article and the lecture are about Chevalier memoir. the article states that some of the events which mentioned in the memoir are actually confabulated by him in order to make his life more excitable and the author provides three reasons of support. However, the professor believes that the memoir is precise and reliable and casts doubt on the claims made in the article.
Firstly, the reading states that in the memoir Chevalier claims that he was very rich but recent evidence showed that Chevalier has borrowed a considerable money from Swiss merchant. The professor, however, refutes this point. She says that because Chevalier borrows some money that does not necessarily make him poor. moreover, because the selling process takes some time, he prefers to borrwo the money in order to pay for the gamblers while he waits to sell some of his properties.
Secondly, the reading claims that it is impossible for Chevalier to remember all the small details about his conversation with Voltaire, since a long time lapse between their meeting and the time when he wrote the memoir. This point was argued by the professor. She states that Chevalier, in fact, wrote the conversation immediately after he met Voltaire, then, he added later on to his memoir. Thus, it was easy for him to remember all the details.
Finally, the article posits that the incidence of his escape from Vietnam prison is really doubtful, the author of the article believe that some of Chevalier's friends bribed the jailer in order to free him. This point was argued by the professor. She states that some of the other prisoners with Chevalier had more powerful friends, but none of them was able to escape from the jail. Furthermore, studies showed that the ceiling of Chevalier was repaired after he get-away. Thus, this provides a logical evidence that Chevalier is actually escaped by the same method he mentioned in his memoir.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...the lecture are about Chevalier memoir. the article states that some of the events ...
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Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...evalier memoir. the article states that some of the events which mentioned in the memoir ar...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'considerable money'.
Suggestion: considerable money
...ence showed that Chevalier has borrowed a considerable money from Swiss merchant. The professor, how...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...hat does not necessarily make him poor. moreover, because the selling process takes some...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...rgued by the professor. She states that some of the other prisoners with Chevalier had more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 22.412803532 192% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 322.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97204968944 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47824724852 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484472049689 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4234730361 49.2860985944 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0625 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06452816374 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476498316697 0.272083759551 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160410803911 0.0996497079465 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793828936685 0.0662205650399 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306567152993 0.162205337803 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376162785242 0.0443174109184 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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