TPO 08- Toward the end of his life, the Chevalier de Seingalt (1725-1798) wrote a long memoir recounting his life and adventures. The Chevalier was a somewhat controversial figure, but since he met many famous people, including kings and writers, his memoir has become a valuable historical source about European society in the eighteenth century. However, some critics have raised doubts about the accuracy of the memoir. They claim that the Chevalier distorted or invented many events in the memoir to make his life seem more exciting and glamorous than it really was.
The reading passage and lecture have conflicting opinions about whether or not the chevalier memoir of his life is correct. The article strongly postulates that some people thought he reformed or altered his biography because of desiring to like others. On the other hand, The listening adamantly delineates that it was actually so accurate in his situation due to the several compelling reasons.
First and foremost, According to the author of the excerpt that he described himself as a prosperous person to do something fancy but it wasn't persuasive because based on the proof he borrowed a lot of money from a Swiss merchant. Nonetheless, The professor offsets these points by declaring that he just sold his property then it took a few days to convert it into money which was had to give to trader also it didn't mean he was a poor one.
On top of this, the professor in the listening elaborates by bringing up the point that during the dialogue between well-known writer and chevalier, it was possible that he wrote everything in their discussion then he could remember all of the things during that time. Moreover, it had a piece of evidence that he noted a journal and paper at that time. these claims refute the writer's implications which about he couldn't recollect all of the things during the conversation without any records.
The text lastly insists that is wasn't reliable that he escaped from venice's prison because he has a lot of influential friends that might give bribe to help to get away from jail. The speaker in the lecture counters these indications by asserting that during that time he had been with people who were more potent than his supporters but those people still had been in there after he escaped. Furthermore, after that time, the prison of venice had to fix that room which he had been so it meant that he used the metal to made a hole in the ceiling to escape from it and it needed to repair.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...lecture have conflicting opinions about whether or not the chevalier memoir of his life is cor...
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Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ous person to do something fancy but it wasnt persuasive because based on the proof h...
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Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...which was had to give to trader also it didnt mean he was a poor one. On top of thi...
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...their discussion then he could remember all of the things during that time. Moreover, it h...
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Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...noted a journal and paper at that time. these claims refute the writers implications ...
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Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...the writers implications which about he couldnt recollect all of the things during the ...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ations which about he couldnt recollect all of the things during the conversation without ...
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Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...cords. The text lastly insists that is wasnt reliable that he escaped from venices p...
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Line 4, column 369, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
...ters but those people still had been in there after he escaped. Furthermore, after that tim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, then, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 12.0772626932 174% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 22.412803532 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 30.3222958057 175% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 339.0 270.72406181 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69616519174 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54166043465 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 145.348785872 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557522123894 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 419.366225166 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.372789604 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.727272727 110.228320801 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8181818182 21.698381199 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06452816374 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305149842195 0.272083759551 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113592332347 0.0996497079465 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512232079568 0.0662205650399 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17257605879 0.162205337803 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281614043105 0.0443174109184 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 53.8541721854 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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