Both the reading passage and listening passage are discussing about otters and how their population started to rapidly decline in few years.
The author states that pollution can be the reason,water samples from that area.The lecturer cast doubt on claim made in the article because she thinks that pollution theory is wrong. For pollution we did not find any evidence.
The reading passage is mentioning that pollution affect all the echosystem ratehr than one species. Only widely affecting predator such as Ochra can have influenced. The lecturer rebuts this idea by stating that Otters can not e predator. The reason whales disappear from area is the Orca.
Moreover, the pollution is the main cause of uneven pattern of otter decline some obserevers think that different climate along the coast caused uneven pattern. On the other hand, the lecturer says that pollution theory however because orcas are so large and can not be influenced by pollution
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The reading passage is mentioning that pollution affect all the echosystem ratehr than one species.
Description: The fragment pollution affect all is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace affect with verb, past tense
Sentence: Moreover, the pollution is the main cause of uneven pattern of otter decline some obserevers think that different climate along the coast caused uneven pattern.
Description: The fragment otter decline some is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace decline with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
the lecturer says that pollution theory however because orcas are so large
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
Sentence: The reading passage is mentioning that pollution affect all the echosystem ratehr than one species.
Error: echosystem Suggestion: ecosystem
Error: ratehr Suggestion: rather
Sentence: Moreover, the pollution is the main cause of uneven pattern of otter decline some obserevers think that different climate along the coast caused uneven pattern.
Error: obserevers Suggestion: observers
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 9 12
No. of Words: 157 250
No. of Characters: 786 1200
No. of Different Words: 102 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.54 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.006 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.328 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 61 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 44 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.904 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.39 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.39 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.105 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , water
... states that pollution can be the reason,water samples from that area.The lecturer cas...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...the reason,water samples from that area.The lecturer cast doubt on claim made in th...
^^^
Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pollution theory is wrong. For pollution we did not find any evidence. The readi...
^^
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting that Otters can not e predator. The reason whales disappear from area is the...
^^
Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecause orcas are so large and can not be influenced by pollution
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.299401197605 0.261695866417 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.179640718563 0.158904122519 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0658682634731 0.0723426182421 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0538922155689 0.0435111971325 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0179640718563 0.0277247811725 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14371257485 0.128828473217 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0419161676647 0.0370669169778 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46470190146 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0059880239521 0.0208969081088 29% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.107784431138 0.128158765124 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0239520958084 0.0158828679856 151% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0059880239521 0.0114777025283 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 958.0 1645.83664459 58% => OK
No of words: 155.0 271.125827815 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.18064516129 6.08160592843 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 4.04852973271 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.412903225806 0.374372842146 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296774193548 0.287516216867 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187096774194 0.187439937562 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141935483871 0.113142543107 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46470190146 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 145.348785872 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664516129032 0.539623497131 123% => OK
Word variations: 64.7262512235 53.8517498576 120% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 17.2222222222 21.7502111507 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7022659089 49.3711431718 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.444444444 132.220823453 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 21.7502111507 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.878197800319 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.39072847682 147% => OK
Readability: 46.8996415771 50.5018328374 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.92857142857 1.90840788429 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.58472887211 0.549887131256 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0730872198053 0.142949733639 51% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0438944097381 0.0787303798458 56% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.626230370306 0.631733273073 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.216009574092 0.139662658121 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.262865843544 0.266732575781 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141954111958 0.103435571967 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.275203207257 0.414875509568 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.14765058276 0.0530846634433 278% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.37520150864 0.40443939384 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123131269015 0.0528353158467 233% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.26048565121 141% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.1766004415 157% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.2958057395 78% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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