TPO 12
The lecture and the reading passage discuss face of Jane Austen, who was one of the most famous of all English novelists. Although the passage claims that a portrait which belongs to the Austen family is a portrait of the Jane Austen, the speaker refutes this idea through several reasons which I will describe in this reporter.
First and foremost, the passage points out that Austen extended family had used this portrait as an illustration in an edition of her letters, the professor rejects this by claiming thatJun was dead in 1882, and portrait have been painted 70 years after she was dead. Therefore, it hardly belongs the Jane Austen.
Furthermore, unlike the passage which state that this portrait as similar to Cassandra's sketch; hence, it may belong to the Jane Austen. However, the professor argues that it is true the subject of painting the same as Cassandra's sketch. But, their family was large, and they had a lot of teenager and children. This portrait belongs to the Marianne Kempian who was nice of Austen.
Finally, although the passage says that Ozias Humphrey may be the painter of that portrait, and he was working in the period when Jane Austen was at the same age as the girl in the painting. The speaker disagrees by mentioning that a stamp in the back of the painting shows that the canvases were bought from William Leg, and in his working period Jane was about twenty-seven years old which is much older than the age of the girl in the painting.
- TPO 20 70
- Do you agree or disagree? If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. 70
- Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child (ages 5 to 10)? Why? Being helpful to others Being honest Being well-organized Use specific examples and evidences to support your answer. 66
- TPO 44 85
- TPO 47 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 281, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun teenager seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of teenagers'.
Suggestion: a lot of teenagers
...t, their family was large, and they had a lot of teenager and children. This portrait belongs to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, may, so, therefore, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 258.0 270.72406181 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82558139535 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38632869268 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.217085825 49.2860985944 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 21.698381199 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06452816374 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.512911635995 0.272083759551 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220187329928 0.0996497079465 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08793500199 0.0662205650399 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.337563542546 0.162205337803 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046830735293 0.0443174109184 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.8541721854 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.7273730684 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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