TPO 12- Integrated Writing Task
Although there is an amateur sketch of Jane Austin, not enough image of this well-known English novelist is available. The reading claims that the girl in a recently founded painting is Jane because of some pieces of evidence. The lecturer cast serious doubt on the claim by asserting some reasons widely explained hereunder.
First of all, although the Austin family has endorsed that this is her picture, the lecturer found it unconvincing because of the fact that when they used her portrait, she had been dead for 65 years, so they had not actually seen her to be able to recognize.
Secondly, it is true that there is a resemblance between the girl in the portrait and Jane in her sister's sketch, but it does not prove that they are the same person; because there were a lot of her relatives, who were teenager, at that time, and they were like Jane -for instance, her distant niece.
Lastly, in spite the fact that the painting's style links to Ozias Humphrey, the canvas, which the picture is painted on, had not been sold in London when Jane was a teenager, which means it had probably painted later.
All in all, considering the evidence in the passage as well as claimes in the lecture, the picture could belong to one of Jane Austin's relatives but unfortunately not her.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...ure, the lecturer found it unconvincing because of the fact that when they used her portrait, she had be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 227.0 270.72406181 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74008810573 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45687049275 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577092511013 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 419.366225166 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 21.2450331126 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4971498384 49.2860985944 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.714285714 110.228320801 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4285714286 21.698381199 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.4285714286 7.06452816374 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23450751563 0.272083759551 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103859874775 0.0996497079465 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045573269782 0.0662205650399 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12129264636 0.162205337803 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281693104974 0.0443174109184 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.3589403974 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 53.8541721854 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.498013245 141% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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