TPO 15- Q1
The article states that the cane toad is native to central and South America, and it was imported to Australia deliberately, in order to protect farmers' crop by eating harmful insects. But toad multiplied rapidly, and now it's threat to native animals. Few way have been suggested to stop toad from being spread, and the author provides three reasons for that. However, the professor declares that destroying toad won't be easy, and it may cause very bad damages to the environment. The professor refutes each reason of the passage.
First, the reading states that building a national fence prevents toad from being spread out to an area that toad has not colonized yet. The speaker refuses this y saying that this animal leaves its eggs in the streams and the rivers and if one egg or one toad go out from the fence through the flow of the stream; leaves the program ineffective.
Second, the reading says, toads could be captured, and killed by volunteers, in addition to that, volunteers can find the eggs of toads, and destroy them. The lecturer asserts that, untrained volunteers may damage the environment by destroying the native frogs of the rivers of Australia; because the frogs are native to that environment.
Third, the passage says, designing a virus that controls the population of toads by preventing them from maturing and reproducing can be useful for out goal. However, the speaker says that some toads are original to the habitat and it kills them. Moreover, this virus may spread in America, toads original habitats, and kill them. The virus may e transported because of the fact that Australia exports this animal to different countries for research, and pet keeping purposes.
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Essay evaluation report
now it's threat to native animals.
now it's the threat to native animals.
Few way have been suggested
Few ways have been suggested
Moreover, this virus may spread in America, toads original habitats, and kill them.
Description: 'them' refers to what? Be sensitive to use pronouns.
flaws:
Be sensitive to use pronouns.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 286 250
No. of Characters: 1377 1200
No. of Different Words: 148 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.112 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.815 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.414 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 100 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.422 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.769 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.343 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.578 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.142 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The article states that the cane toad is...
^^^^
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun way seems to be countable; consider using: 'Few ways'.
Suggestion: Few ways
..., and now its threat to native animals. Few way have been suggested to stop toad from b...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... refutes each reason of the passage. First, the reading states that building ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eam; leaves the program ineffective. Second, the reading says, toads could be...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rogs are native to that environment. Third, the passage says, designing a vir...
^^^^
Line 7, column 364, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
... kill them. The virus may e transported because of the fact that Australia exports this animal to differ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246105919003 0.261695866417 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.177570093458 0.158904122519 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0529595015576 0.0723426182421 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0280373831776 0.0435111971325 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0280373831776 0.0277247811725 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102803738318 0.128828473217 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0654205607477 0.0370669169778 176% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.52919913431 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0342679127726 0.0208969081088 164% => OK
Particles: 0.00934579439252 0.00154638098197 604% => OK
Determiners: 0.1246105919 0.128158765124 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0218068535826 0.0158828679856 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00623052959502 0.0114777025283 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1720.0 1645.83664459 105% => OK
No of words: 285.0 271.125827815 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0350877193 6.08160592843 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.04852973271 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361403508772 0.374372842146 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273684210526 0.287516216867 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178947368421 0.187439937562 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108771929825 0.113142543107 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52919913431 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547368421053 0.539623497131 101% => OK
Word variations: 55.7969130566 53.8517498576 104% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0529801325 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.9230769231 21.7502111507 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4765591491 49.3711431718 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.307692308 132.220823453 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 21.7502111507 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.878197800319 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.39072847682 177% => OK
Readability: 49.2914979757 50.5018328374 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.77333333333 1.90840788429 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.755761224362 0.549887131256 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147203233131 0.142949733639 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0551657552232 0.0787303798458 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.618360964281 0.631733273073 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146701592414 0.139662658121 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.354160443511 0.266732575781 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106306003116 0.103435571967 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.449770758695 0.414875509568 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0307994933248 0.0530846634433 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.563007088008 0.40443939384 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462974390702 0.0528353158467 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 3.62251655629 221% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.2958057395 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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