Both the reading and the lecture discuss sience of archeology related to studing important artifacts . The author beleives that such studies are not supported . However , the lecturer is convenced that they are well supported .
First , the author points out that many artifacts were lost due to the increase of population which was accompained by construction of many towns , cities and buildings . The lecturer casts doubt on this point saying that new guidlines suggests that before establishing any buidling , sites should be studied to figure out if they are important . In case the are important they should be preserved by documentaion .
Second , the author condents that financial supports for archeological researches are not satisfactory . As a result , many projects are left behind without support . The lecturer rebuts this claim stating that any archeological research is supported by the companies not by governments so this will provide great financial support to such researches .
Third , the author believes that it is hard to attain jobs in archeology . In addition , such jobs are only limited to universities and government agencies . The lecturer , on the other hand , challenges this point . He says that recent guidlines suggests that paid work is provided so experts in archeology get an enough financial support to study places and analys data . Therefore , different jobs will be available .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, well, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 217.0 270.72406181 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44700460829 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95225305508 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 145.348785872 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589861751152 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.993462565 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4285714286 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06452816374 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 4.19205298013 644% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179394014054 0.272083759551 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648976509585 0.0996497079465 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471483912785 0.0662205650399 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107074615686 0.162205337803 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445673968189 0.0443174109184 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.2367328918 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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