Lecturer casts doubt on the idea indicated in the passage that human evolution is hamring wildlife, especially birds with following points: it decreases population, less land is used for agriculture and contaminates water/destroys food chain.
Although passage mentions that urban development is destroying natural habitat for birds, professor argues that only some species are in this danger. Acording to the example she mentioned, in urban developments residents only complained about the increasing population of birds. With this argument she clarified that some species shrink while other species increase.
Secondly, she disagrees with the point made in the passage that humans are expanding the agricultural area and damaging the natural habitat which makes birds homeless. As we cover more area with agriculture, less wilderness is left for natural habitats to live. Lecturer opposes that nowadays people started using less land on agrculture because new technology helped us to maximize the amout of food we receive per area. As a result, no more land will be destoyed to keep up with the rapidly increasing human population and agriculture land will soon decrease.
Lastly, lecturer casts doubt on the idea that ofchemical pesticides have negative effect on birds by destroying food chain. Passage indicates that chemicals used to kill pests in agriculture and home makes their way into the water causing fish and plants get toxicated. Birds have high chance of dying after eating these toxicated meals. On the other hand, lectuer argues that modern technology made pesticides less toxic and plants resistant to pests. Which means pesticides will no longer harm birds and food chain.
- TPO-07 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 93
- TPO-01 - Integrated Writing Task In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay inorder to do so. A mandatory policy requiri 85
- TPO-02 - Integrated Writing Task In many organizations, perhaps the best way to approach certain new projects is to assemble a group of people into a team. Having a team of people attack a project offers several advantages. First of all, a group of people 60
- TPO-18 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...agrculture because new technology helped us to maximize the amout of food we rece...
^^
Line 8, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y into the water causing fish and plants get toxicated. Birds have high chance of...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 263.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47908745247 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68094542551 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 145.348785872 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8707987451 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06452816374 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382195913037 0.272083759551 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127263201192 0.0996497079465 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824440218619 0.0662205650399 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211985418871 0.162205337803 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979097132547 0.0443174109184 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.8541721854 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.2367328918 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 63.6247240618 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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