TPO 18-1
Although the author supports three main hypotheses to address the reasons of declination of Torreya, a type of evergreen tree in the state of Florida, the professor finds all the reasons dubious and brings some counter reasons to refute them all.
Considering the first reasons, the reading holds the view that the favorable condition to grow this type of tree is a cool and wet microclimate. Reestablishing them in same place where they thrived thousands years ago would be a great idea. However, the professor refers to the fact that reestablishing them is not a practical idea to save them due to the fact that global warming results in increasing temperature of whole area and it influences on microclimates as well in which makes them unfavorable factor to survive.
Furthermore, the reading material contends that translocating them to cooler lands of north Florida called assisted migration, absolutely help them survive. On the other hand, the lecturer finds it unconvincing and asserts that assisted migration causes harm for all species and plants in that area. For example, Black locust trees destroyed all plants when they were translocated to north.
Eventually, the reading passage argues that preserving them in research center not only leads them survive from extinction but also they can be used for conducting research. On the contrary, the professor states that research centers do not have the capacity to protect the long and diverse trees which cannot resist in diseases when they are in minority.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, so, well, for example, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 246.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22357723577 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81124821586 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.492503937 49.2860985944 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.777777778 110.228320801 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 21.698381199 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 7.06452816374 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212108190035 0.272083759551 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809663082877 0.0996497079465 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02551786924 0.0662205650399 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115778319847 0.162205337803 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124983774704 0.0443174109184 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.3589403974 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.42419426049 115% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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