The reading states that Torreya taxifoha, a type of evergreen tree once very common in the state of florida , started to die out. And it provides three ways to address the decline of Torreya. The professor says that unfurtunatly those ways are not satisfication solutions. And she refutes each claim in the reading.
First, the reding claims that reestablish Torreya in the same location in which it thrived for thousands of years. But the professor says that ,this solution is unsuccessful because Torreya will affect by changing of climate and many areas are becoming drier so it will not have a good condition to survive.
Second, the reading states that moving Torreya to an entirely different location, far from its florida microclimate. However the professor says that if black saplings moved north, they will kill many plants and trees, and they will become in dangerous and there are a lot of unproductive outcome.
Third, the reading says that, preserve Torreya in research centers.seeds and plants can be moved from the wild and preserved in a closely monitored environment.The lecture contests this. She says that research is not have enough place for population and they will not resist diseases for long time.
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the reding claims that reestablish Torreya in the same location in which it thrived for thousands of years.
the reding claims to reestablish Torreya in the same location in which it thrived for thousands of years.
and they will become in dangerous
and they will become in danger
the reading says that, preserve Torreya in research centers
Description: what is the subject for 'preserve'? can you re-write this sentence?
She says that research is not have enough place
She says that the research does not have enough place
Sentence: The professor says that unfurtunatly those ways are not satisfication solutions.
Error: unfurtunatly Suggestion: unfortunately
Error: satisfication Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: First, the reding claims that reestablish Torreya in the same location in which it thrived for thousands of years.
Error: reding Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Second, the reading states that moving Torreya to an entirely different location, far from its florida microclimate.
Error: florida Suggestion: florid
Error: microclimate Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Words: 202 250
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 19 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 10 12
No. of Words: 202 250
No. of Characters: 997 1200
No. of Different Words: 119 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.77 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.936 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.58 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 71 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.34 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.391 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.635 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.095 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4