Torreya taxifoha a type of evergreen tree in Florida is extincting and reading suggest three strategies to avoiding this. In the lecture professor refute effectiveness of these strategies.
First, author says by cultivating this tree in coolest and dampest micro climate zone they will be conserved. In the lecture professor express today micro climate has been drying because of affect of original weather. She says because of global warming larger region climate affected micro climate.
Second, reading says by assisted migration mean by taking this three to a far region with cooler weather it survive better. In the lecture professor disagrees and says this strategy has been done for another specie already but unpredictable negative results have been earn. Professor expresses by assisted migration of a specie other planet and trees in new environment that themselves are in danger of extinction may be extinct.
Third, reading claim by create a cultivate environment for thriving this tree scientist can monitoring all condition there and preserve this specie. In the lecture professor says if a tree want to survive in a environment their population should be more which research center has not capacity for cultivated a large population of them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... because of affect of original weather. Second, reading says by assisted migrati...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'survives'?
Suggestion: survives
... to a far region with cooler weather it survive better.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 12.0772626932 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 22.412803532 27% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 30.3222958057 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 451.0 1373.03311258 33% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 84.0 270.72406181 31% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36904761905 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.02740010404 4.04702891845 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6733282016 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 63.0 145.348785872 43% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.540411800872 139% => OK
syllable_count: 139.5 419.366225166 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.595145059 49.2860985944 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.2 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06452816374 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168582249049 0.272083759551 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809494158983 0.0996497079465 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752575995289 0.0662205650399 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105844172051 0.162205337803 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420526943895 0.0443174109184 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.42419426049 117% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 63.6247240618 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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