TPO-18 - Integrated Writing Task In the 1950s Torreya taxifoha, a type of evergreen tree once very common in the state of Florida, started to die out. No one is sure exactly what caused the decline, but chances are good that if nothing is done, Torreya wi

The article states the three preserving methods of plant named Torreya that almost extinct.And the lecturer cast doubt on these mean.

First of all, The author argues that planting Torreya place where once they flourished. This means refute by the professor by explaining that microclimate is heavily influenced by climate changes. Whole North Florida get drier than past days, and it is unfavorable for Torreya.

Furthermore, The reading raises to migrate Torreya much cooler place where seems to suit them an option. The speaker rebuts this choice by arguing that plant that porting by humans may terminate native species.For example, Black locust that also transferred by the people caused destructive damage to original plants. Because there are no enemies, who harm Black locust.
The speaker is concerned similar case will cause when Torreya migrates.

Finally, The article proposes the solution that preserving Torreya in research centers. This point is challenged by the lecturer by illustrating that the flaw of this solution. The population that centers can obtain is not enough to survive the disease.Therefore it is not a satisfactory solution to long-term preservation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...plant named Torreya that almost extinct.And the lecturer cast doubt on these mean. ...
^^^
Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... by humans may terminate native species.For example, Black locust that also transfe...
^^^
Line 8, column 254, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...in is not enough to survive the disease.Therefore it is not a satisfactory solution to lo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 254, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...in is not enough to survive the disease.Therefore it is not a satisfactory solution to lo...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, may, so, therefore, for example, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 1373.03311258 74% => OK
No of words: 183.0 270.72406181 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53005464481 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82567032618 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 145.348785872 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68306010929 0.540411800872 126% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 419.366225166 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0342245445 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06452816374 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305240717557 0.272083759551 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107948820137 0.0996497079465 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747936282239 0.0662205650399 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157485817447 0.162205337803 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395439824392 0.0443174109184 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.2367328918 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.42419426049 115% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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